The Cranes of Ibycus

In Greek mythology Ibycus is robbed and killed on his way to a musical competition. He 
appeals to some cranes overhead to avenge his cause - cranes considered a good omen.
Later at the festival, held in a huge amphitheater, the furies announce and morn the death of 
Ibycus. During the performance the cranes fly overhead and one of the robbers cries, "Look, 
comrade, the cranes of Ibycus!" They are both caught.

"Look!    Look, comrade
There yonder flow
The cranes of Ibycus!"

Above the stadium
In perfect row,
The cranes of Ibycus.

Above the Fury's chorus,
In dissonance, crow,
The cranes of Ibycus!

Above the bedlam crowd
Their numbers grow,
The cranes of Ibycus.

Above the hoard of voices
Become now low,
The cranes of Ibycus.

Above the perfect silence,
Flying slow,
The cranes of Ibycus.

Above ten thousand heads
Which lowly bow,
The cranes of Ibycus.

Beyond the tiers and fading
In the distant glow,
The cranes of Ibycus.
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*Bullfinch, Mythology
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Good work..Educational also..Enjoyed..As I poured syrup on my husband's sausage this morn, I thought about you..It was not Maple though..I did not indulge..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits to soaring...Sara
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 5:50 AM
So many well written triplets... the repetitions are most effective. Thanks for the mythology lesson! Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 2:47 PM
the story-line and the write flows well together, hope that all is well with you and thanks for your comments, on my writes, take care D-nyce
Mason Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:03 PM
Beautifully done here, Daver ... I'm picking up the Atlantis book tomorrow at the library. I'll send a book report soon ... smile ... I've never been below cranes but the Canadian geese let me know they're going by as they insist I come out to look at their beautiful flight with their honking song ...
Reynolds Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 4:14 PM
An AWESOME poem of poor Ibucusv- I too love the repitition, a very cool poem - hey, did you ever enter those contests? Good luck if you did! They are excellent. love Kristin
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 4:04 PM
Poor Ibycus. Love the repetition of each ending line. Very cool poem and story which makes me feel like everyone was totally freaked out and in complete awe when they flew overhead, low and slow. Hope you are getting help for entering your other poem. Anything I can do feel free to write. Love, Shar
Gorelick Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 10:01 AM
This is very nice Daver, I enjoyed the story and the beautiful flow of the piece. BG
Torres Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:19 AM
Excellent Daver really enjoyed. Thank you for your comments. Michael Torres
Cooper Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 6:55 AM
I have always loved mythology, this is very good. full of imagery and grace. thank you for sharing
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