The Covered Sky

The sky was covered
With different shapes of clouds
A patch of blue peaked 
It began to rain
After the rain a rainbow
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Magdalinos Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Hello Darlene,this is a lovely tanka,my dear friend,Darlene Be blessed!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 10:24 AM
"The Covered Sky" is a beautiful write. Love it. Have a great/blessed day...........
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 4:50 AM
Hello Paula, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Thomas Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 11:44 AM
A very calming day I would imagine. Hello Darlene :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Hello FJ Thomas, yes it is a calming day. Hello FJ Thomas. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Foster Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 4:15 PM
I love rainbows. This is a lovely, sweet... poem. Ann
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Hello Ann I love the rainbows to. I hope to see more sun showers. Hugs.
George Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 10:03 PM
Hi Darlene, love the melange of beautiful images you have strung together.....!After the rain, it is so beautiful to see the the clear blue sky with the rainbow...
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Hello Valsa, yes after a sunshine rainfall it is good to see the rainbows. I do love the rainbows. Enjoy yur day my friend. Hugs.
Maverick Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:17 PM
A brightening rightening; and quite write of You to so do.' Love it.) Oh & blessings to you.!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Hello Joe Maverick, Thank you for the lovely comment. This can happen when not wearing the right shoes. Blessings my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 5:36 PM
After the gloomy weather nature compensates us with a rainbow! Wonderful Tanka, my dear friend, Darlene! Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 5:41 PM
Hello Demetrios, Demetrios i love the rain shower. because I know a rainbow will appear. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 2:11 PM
Nice Tanka, Darlene. I liked it all, but the rainbow at the end was the best ending my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Hello Bill, the rainbow is also my favourite. Thank you for the lovely comment. Your poetess friend Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Dear Darlene, I love your poems - those express beautiful emotions with so much depth - I keep thinking about those images for very long! Thank you for visiting my page - your visit is a wonderful delight! I am honoured with your FAVE! Love and friendship ~ Mala
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June 6, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Hello Mala, Thank you Mala for this wonderful comment. I do the same. Your welcome. I love your poetry. to . Love & Friendship , Darlene
Vangaveti Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 10:26 AM
I'm into imagining and unfolding the series of events as you mentioned in your poem! What good poetry can't show you? Thanks for this gift!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 11:18 AM
Hello Swatha Vangaveti, so nice to meet you. You are welcome. Swetha. Enjoy your day my friend.
Rose  Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:41 PM
I so love the part when the rainbow comes out :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 4:03 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, the rainbow is my favourite part of my poem to . Hugs.
Gasun Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Hello my dear friend Darlene! The image of your poem is so beautiful and inspiring. I love clouds and I love seeing them in different shapes. This is an awesome tank my friend. I love it and enjoyed a lot. Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always. Hugs..
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Hello Len, I am a cloud watcher I like to see the different shapes of clouds. Thank you Len. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 11:28 PM
I get to see this view often here in Hawaii the land of rainbows. This is a lovely tanka Darlene. Blessings xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Hello Connie, oh you are so lucky. I love rainbows. Luckyu live. Blessings my friend.
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Nicely crafted tanka, Darlene. Your imagery shed beautiful reflections too. Blessings
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:05 PM
Hello Lassad, Thank you for the lovely comment. My imagination wrote this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.I hope all is well with you.
Romios Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Beautifully done. Panagiota
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Hello Panagiota, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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