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The Cost of Living

A faceless man is standing in produce. He’s crying. No one stops. No one asks him why. He says the sky is falling He says it again and again. He grabs a passerby’s arm and tell them it’s falling. The passerby drops a head of lettuce onto the floor. A woman in tattered jeans says the cost of meat has gone up. A young mother with a baby in the basket wheels a cart of formula and wonders how anyone can afford to live while outside a boy in high school races an empty shopping cart through the parking lot. A woman with stringy, long hair standing near the entrance plays guitar and the case is open for dollar bills and quarters. A weary clerk brings in a line of carts and says the task never ends. The woman says life’s a show— Bring in the clowns, she sings. Displays of Doritos lined up by the entrance say buy more— one bag is never enough. The clerk stands near the front and keeps his hands in his pockets as he watches a wave of humanity walks in and out the entrance. The manager looks at him. Smile, she says. One month after his lady friend transferred to another store he is standing alone in a crowd.

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Date: 9/7/2024 9:54:00 PM
You have shown a slice of life through this interrelated series of scenes of modern times. The cost of living has gone up and the average finds it difficult to make both ends meet. Some feel it more powerfully than the others like the man who wails... "the sky is falling"! We cannot turn our faces from the harsh realities of life. Life has become quite hard for everyone. I see that this is Poem of the Day. Congratulations dear Mike on your honor.
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:49:00 PM
It's difficult indeed, living in today's world, just trying to survive. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:26:00 PM
This hits home is a HARD way.
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:06:00 PM
Wowee Mike. The cost of living upfront and on display, every day. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 8/22/2024 11:24:00 AM
a POTD. Wow, Congratulations!!
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Date: 8/22/2024 9:21:00 AM
Sad reality, the rich are getting richer, you know the rest. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 8/22/2024 8:04:00 AM
Mike, you must have taken a picture of where I shop! Seriously, on the roads to and in the parking lot of the supermarket, beggars abound. May their coffers be filled for a change with change. Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear Mike, congratulate you on POTD with this powerful, thought-provoking poem reminding us the current reality of life, not only in US, but everywhere! Best wishes ~
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:29:00 AM
Hello Mike, I am back to congratulate you on a perfect POTD. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:08:00 AM
Dear Mike, Congratulations on this well deserved POTD. The images are so poignant and highlight the struggles we Americans are facing currently as we support two other democracy's at war. I tried to go vegan recently although not much of a meat eater any way, and my groceries which were already high for one went sky high.
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Date: 8/22/2024 5:30:00 AM
Cool snippet of a life Mike. Enjoy your Potd day
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Date: 8/22/2024 3:18:00 AM
Mike, a powerful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/22/2024 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your engaging potd!
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:57:00 AM
high cost of living is universal and felt even by the upper crust of society...very impressive write,.Mike!
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:34:00 AM
He stands alone but not on his own, everyone is feeling the pinch of price increases going up day by day. Congratulations Mike on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:32:00 AM
Quite a thought provoking verse Mike, congratulations on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 8/21/2024 5:31:00 PM
Without money, supermarkets are no fun. I hope he doesn't starve.
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Date: 8/21/2024 7:44:00 AM
Hello Mike, What a intriguing read! I loved all the messages that are embedded in your poem. Some are obvious and some hidden. You were in the groove on this well-inked piece. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/20/2024 3:57:00 PM
Wow. Very impressive. Love this. A fave
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Date: 8/20/2024 10:58:00 AM
Such great details, lovely imagery and a deep poem. Well done.
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