The Cost Is Enormous

the gloom that clutters
without pride without purpose
in the house of lords

© Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Well it's bad no doubt...But they have plumbed New depths if even their pride has no purpose Harry lol))) I can sense their not your favourite Folk, btw; I hope you can forgive my small joke? I had a smile instead of my normal frown?? If you don't laugh you will cry it's said.) God bless.'
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Love this!
Eslinger Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:16 AM
…distressed prayers from all of us about what is be-glooming our lives…think of that vs. the prayers that would otherwise be sent up, say, re our health, the growth of our souls, the well-being of world’s children & elderly, etc. Heaven is being cluttered by gloom from anger& hate. Woe on us! Astounding penning! XO Sally
Eslinger Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Harry, here is a multiple-interpretation poem. That, IMHO, is superb. My interpretation after 1st quick read was, like others thought, about goats & cultures, like all the disrespect of people one to another. But, then, 2nd, I thought of how THAT was causing Clutter in heaven from all the distressing…….
Eslinger Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Haha! Should be goVts not goats! My spellcheck having fits. I listen to a podcast re mess of disruption in House of Lords where they’re trying to imitate our present Congress haha not funny.
Faulkner Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Let's hope the leaders of all our countries try to work together to do some good~
Jayasankar Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:54 AM
This seems to be a very thought provoking powerful and interesting Senryu...Harry...though I do not know much about the House of Lords...God bless...~ Ani
Mcintosh Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 4:12 AM
Sadly... hoping for prayerful lords... God bless you always, Love, Gina
Calasibetta Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Harry, it seems this is a universal issue;we are struggling with inept leaders whose goals are questionable. Great Write!! Take Care, Paulette
Crabtree Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 6:54 PM
I was a little lost at first. Had to do some research. Great poem Harry! :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 4:20 PM
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Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Powerful and evocative. A nice one, Harry. :)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 1:32 PM
well said Harry:-) hugs jan xx we have a new chief Minister elected today will be interesting to see how he runs the country for the next 5 yrs, scary situation our longest serving politician is just 15 yrs, so many new ones this time and its going to be a bumpy ride for sure:-( hugs Jan xx
Deo Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Sir Harry, you weave commentary, politics, poetry pithily, wittily, fittingly )House of Lords sit on their blessed ASSurances of privilege?) SHALOM, SHALOM
Rose  Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Ah, foolish pride, when kissed with ego it can be deadly. Still, I rise every morning with the scent of hope on my pillow, thanks for the thought stop, now I must go, :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Well written and interesting senryu, Harry!
Fleming Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Wow -- spot on! Judging by Andrea's comment this would be a little lost on people not familiar with our two house system of making and passing new law. Wonderful little poem, Harry. Cheers! :) john P.s My great hero, Ezra Pound, would have loved this...truly he would.
Ball Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Oh Amen my friend. Congress and Parliament ain't much different. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 3:30 PM
hmmm, not sure about that middle line, but then again, what do I know about the House of Lords. Keep them coming, Harry.
Gentile Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 9:55 AM
I can certainly relate Harry, well said!!
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Good Morning hh - This is written in the true voice and tone of the format. Your words give pause and reflect truth for the cost is high. Have a wonderful day.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Sometimes I think they don't know what they are doing and where they want to arrive.
Vaso Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 11:54 PM
Well said Harry!
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October 10, 2021 at 12:22 PM
I wonder what they are really like? Will they be able to hold together if they miss the rapture? I enjoyed reading your Senryu. Sara
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