The Cosmos, the Flower and the Bee

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" THE FLOWER AND THE BEE " MY PHOTO, ©

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Look as far and as wide as you can, my friend, 
Turn your eyes towards the sky and try to pierce infinity-
This vast unknown- 
Ponder about its existence 
Let not a single thing unexamined 
Any stunning flower untouched  
Any majestic bird unobserved 
Any magnificent fish unnoticed 
And tell me 
Isn't life a miracle?
An unbelievable story? 
An inconceivable design?
Yet
A  mesmerizing reality?

Look how heaven and earth are put together:
A harmonious whole operating with such precision and
With a single purpose in mind- LIFE!

Tell me, could this great design be the outcome of chance?
Of a hazardous consequence?
Or
The work of blind forces?

Look closer my friend, once again,
Pay attention to the details of this incredible miracle of life
Look how things are so wisely operating 
Observe the relationship between a flower and a bee
How they are interrelated,  
Interconnected and
Interdependent 

Marvel how, although they both are so transient,
They maintain eternity 
Note the way they obey the cosmic laws 
Thus
Enacting the choreography of life and death that divinity has conceived 
And by doing so they become divine themselves and their art holy 
                                       
Let us, my friend,
Be inspired by them and let us create our own
Harmonious coexistence
Our own choreography, inspired by God,
For
To incarnate His will in reality
So as to glorify His creation
And us to live in peace as He meant us to live!







© Demetrios Trifiatis 
     06 August 2019


* This is my 2400th poem. 
Thank all those who have commented on my poems since 2012! I also thank PoetrySoup because they have helped my poems become known thus they were published in books and anthologies. Soon, I think to stop posting. God bless you all my friends.

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Date: 9/9/2019 7:18:00 PM
I can feel and relate to your poem daily as a nature lover and those who have no respect for nature and creation anger me.
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Date: 9/4/2019 1:58:00 PM
Hello Demetrios, God has made nature beautiful. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/19/2019 9:09:00 AM
Lovely writing Demetrios, congrats on POTD. I'm saddened to know there are those who don't appreciate you and your writing, congrats on 2400 poems that is quite an accomplishment!
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Date: 8/17/2019 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2400th poem! There is a dance in all of nature and you've penned these steps brilliantly. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 8/7/2019 9:43:00 AM
Your poem eloquently expresses my shared perspective regarding God’s creation. The more I look at science and nature the greater my belief in God.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/7/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thank you for your precious comment my friend, Richard. God bless you!
Date: 8/7/2019 9:41:00 AM
I am saddened to think you might stop posting. You are an important part of this poetry soup family. Hope you reconsider. Blessings Richard.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/7/2019 11:24:00 AM
My dearest friend, Richard., do you know that when I run for the European Parliament members of the Soup threatened to write to the European Commission accusing me of being racist and a person of no morals! Who me , that all my writing is a living proof of the contrary. Unfortunately there are some who would be happy to see me go. I do not do it for them , I just see that I will leave the world worse than I found it and this saddens me. I keep fighting for love an justice, I need time to relax. Soon will be 75, God, willing. Thank you though. I will keep your thought in mind. Is people like you who make me write!
Date: 8/6/2019 8:24:00 PM
Demetrios, this poem is amazing! How could anyone look at God's creation and acknowledge Him? You expressed this so well. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/7/2019 2:12:00 AM
Yes, how could anyone witness this marvelous world and not believe? Is a question that I ask every minute my dear, friend, Kim. Thank you for lovely visit and comment!
Date: 8/6/2019 12:26:00 PM
- Many thanks for this beautiful poem :) - Congratulations on your 2400 poems ... I wait for the next 2400, my friend :) - A gem to fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/6/2019 1:07:00 PM
Although I would like to post another 2400 poems my dearest friend Anne-Lise, there are those who would hate to see me do that. Hahaha. Anyway, let us see if I live that long.... No, I am fine! Thank you dearest Anne-Lise for your support all those years. I think you are the only one who never stopped visiting and commenting and for that I am grateful. God bless you my friend for your kindness and for your friendship! Thank you!!
Date: 8/6/2019 12:11:00 PM
I stand in awe of nature (God's creation) daily...my latest fixation is the hummingbirds that gather upon my porch to drink of the nectar in my feeder! Gorgeous poem :)
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Date: 8/6/2019 12:58:00 PM
We all should stand in awe before nature in all its forms of expression. Thank you dear, Sandra for your lovely visit!
Date: 8/6/2019 8:09:00 AM
This is beautiful Demetrios. <3 xomo
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Date: 8/6/2019 8:44:00 AM
I am glad you think so dearest, Maureen! God bless you. Hugs xxx
Date: 8/6/2019 8:05:00 AM
Incredible is the universe and fabulous are the designs of nature...many congrats to your mighty pen that disperses doses of wisdom in every verse. Much appreciate your contributions my friend. Awesome beauty-- that flower is! Your poem is a FAVE.
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Date: 8/6/2019 8:43:00 AM
Dearest, Vijay, you are among the few upright people here and you always found time to visit and comment. Your good words were for me very appreciated and helped to overcome unjustified attacs . Here I would like to thank you for your kindness and your friendship . Blessings!
Date: 8/6/2019 7:35:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. You are very talented and I am saddened you may stop posting. I do hope that you will return and I wish you the best! :)
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Date: 8/6/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words dearest, Heidi and for your friendship! Yes, after seven years of continuous writing I am seriously thinking to stop posting by the end of the month. I always tried to pass positive messages but some people didn't liked it and showed their dislike in different ways. God bless you my dear!
Date: 8/6/2019 7:35:00 AM
I saved this as a FAV too :)
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Date: 8/6/2019 8:37:00 AM
You are too generous my friend! I appreciate it! Blessings!
Date: 8/6/2019 2:40:00 AM
My first read of the day and what a beautiful piece of writing it is too Demetrios. Today many are blinded by the trapping's of technology and fail to observe the beauty of creation not looking beyond their front door. Everything about creation facinates me and I appreciate its beauty. Congratulations on reaching your 2400 verse always sharing with us your wisdom and not forgetting those beautiful flowers that accompany your work. Tom
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Date: 8/6/2019 2:51:00 AM
It is an honor to be friends with you dear, Tom. I appreciate you and what you stand for. You are of the few people I know here that writes for the joy of writing and that you are friendly with all. Yes, after seven years that have been writing one poem every day, I am thinking by the end of the month to stop posting due to an unseen war that goes on without end. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. God bless your kindness my friend!
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Date: 8/6/2019 2:43:00 AM
( I ran out of characters) Sad also to see that you may not be posting anymore, I hope that it is only a temporary break, your words of wisdom will be missed by many. I am honoured that we have become friends here on soup. Tom
Date: 8/6/2019 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations dear Demetrios on your 2400th poem and what a poem! To me it is an Anthem and is utterly divine. I will keep this as a FAV forever and read it often, as this world we live in gets evermore crazy. Your words are magical and so inspiring - you are a most talented and awesome human being dearest Demetrios with the kindest soul and I will truly miss your postings. Please come back soon. With kindest thoughts and hugs from Ann xx
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Date: 8/6/2019 2:03:00 AM
Your heartfelt words humble me and warm my heart at the same time. Thank you for your appreciation dearest Ann, unfortunately, there not many people like you around. Yes, we need a better world. I am afraid that I will leave this wold worse that I have found it on the day of my birth. God bless you my beloved friend. I pray you stay always happy and healthy . The wold needs people like you! Hugs xxx
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