The Corn Crib

I've passed this way many a day 
and wondered as I strayed;
Who had opened, what had filled
the gap within the crib's dark bay.

The opening small in the wall
at once so spare yet alluring
with tilted sides and gap toothed maw 
which now held field mice burrowing.

The boards of red once formed a bed
for stored feed of golden maze,
these cedar shingles had sheltered 
the abundance of by gone days.

The farm's gone now, no fields, no cow    
long past its youth, its heyday             
housing only bitter sweet and 
memories of corn cobs and play. 

Yet, here it stands, as I go by,
and so quietly it brings to me; 
the lingering joy of laughter
the faint echoes of jubilee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/11/2011 3:54:00 PM
A wonderful write, Debbie! A strong nostalgic piece...makes me sad, though it brings you fond memories of "laughter...and... faint echoes of jubilee". Thank you for sharing, and so wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:39:00 PM
Deb, This reminds me of the poem 'To a Mouse', by Robert Burns. You are truly a master poet. Lainie
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Date: 4/10/2011 3:09:00 PM
Sad yet wonderfully depicted picture of desolate farm,no fields,no cow..loved this Debbie...Joy to you, Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:37:00 PM
sweet memories abound in this ..lovely piece ..love,Deb
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:44:00 AM
a very sweet and touching poem, glad you wrote and posted it. thank you for reading Newton Corners and for your comment and information.
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