The Conversation Begins Part Ii

I crossed the stream and as I did I felt the living water refresh my soul.
And while I was still in the process of walking across the stream, I could
feel the water get very warm, as it washed my feet before I stepped over to
holy ground.  Then I was finally standing before Him.  My total height barely
reached His nose.  I could not even look into His face because of His brilliance.
"Am I killing you now?"  He asked me very softly, very sweetly.
"No. I love you," I said as a single tear dropped from my eye.
"I know that you do."
"I know that you won't bite me."
"And yet you hesitate," He said.
"Yes, because I love you so much, I would never want to let you go,"
I told Him, shaking as I did so.
"Is that so bad?" He asked me in an ever softer voice than He had yet used.
More tears were starting to make their way down my cheeks.
"I love you so much little one, that I could never let you go. Now do what
you fear the most," He commanded. 
I did. I hesitantly touched His mane. It was so soft, yet slightly coarse.
His scent was like a bouquet of roses.
He kissed me gently on my face, gently kissed the tears running faster down
my cheeks.  I threw my arms around Him as far as I could, and cried until
I could cry no more.  Then a little while later, a feeling of utter peace came
upon me.
"Did I kill you my beloved child?" He asked me, as He passed on to me the 
warmest feeling of love that I had ever experienced.
"No. I love you," I said to Him again, because there was nothing else that I could
find to say.
"Then that's all that matter love," He said.


A little while later my dream vision was gone, but I was not sad.
I knew that we would meet again one day, and then I would stay
there forever with the One I love best.  To this day the Great Lion
of Judah inspires me as I write poems, lyrics, poetic forms of stories
and essays.  There is no greater love in my lifetime than the love I
have for Him.  I hope that my personal relationship with Him encourages
all who read my given works to more fully encompass Him in their lives
you will be glad you did!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/8/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement Dorian! And I am very glad you are a fellow follower of our Lord Jesus! Your picture is beautiful and I know you are royalty of Earth and Heaven because you have much wisdom in your heart as well! Again thanks for the encouragement and may God always bless you and keep you! love your sister in Christ! Susan
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Date: 4/8/2015 3:15:00 PM
Excellent pen again Susan! I truly enjoyed reading the second part of this excellent conversation poem series, dear friend. I liked your very positive and beautiful end so much, so important to keep our personal relationship with him and the closer we're to him everyday the better.I'm so happy to know you love him that much, He's the best friend we can ever have too.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light! God bless you! :) D
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