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Life seemed rather bleak
The grey skies to him did speak
Of a better world
Somewhere, but not here

He was thought of with smiles
Always a good word
A Laugh or two
Who the hell thought, inside was all blue

He dressed up one day
As a gigantic peanut
Of to the circus he did go
Knowing his fate, he paid at the gate

An elephant’s eye lit up
A dessert finally of size
He ate the gigantic peanut
The skies have now turned gaily blue

They say committing suicide is nuts
This irony is that it turned out to be true
The coroner took care, waiting and waiting
At the elephants end, for suicides revenge

As the dark and despondent man quite frankly
Had such a shitty termination
The smell of sadness
Hangs in the air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/9/2015 7:18:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/15/2015 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Funom , much appreciated!!!!!
Date: 6/28/2015 1:20:00 PM
OMG, committing suicide is NUTS. Hahaha. REALLY?? It's Peanuts!! Planters in the ground. You are such a CARD, Arthur. Just love your entertaining reads.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:30:00 PM
:)
Date: 6/27/2015 3:49:00 AM
with gothic wit and depth, this write shines, arthur!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 6/27/2015 12:04:00 AM
Arthur, you are indeed the master of writing with dark humor. Such creative work!... Reminds me of my poem, "A Tempting Fate". You might like to give it a read.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
I will go have a peek! :)
Date: 6/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
Arthur it is nice to be here reading your work, I like the irony in this it is bitter sweet, well done my friend...David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
I hope you are doing well David, you are very missed on this site!!!! Thanks!
Date: 6/25/2015 1:26:00 PM
This is very sad indeed, but so masterfully written, Arthur. Great write, a 7 :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Laura, :) xoxo
Date: 6/25/2015 8:28:00 AM
I think you meant "Off to the circus". This is a bizarre and effective write Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:24:00 PM
no Richard I meant "Of " but after 2 bottles of wine and much contemplation, and a meeting at the local pub, we discussed your suggestion, and came to the conclusion, you win! It sounds much better saying "off" LOL Cheers, thanks!
Date: 6/25/2015 7:15:00 AM
Well that is an interesting way to go!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:22:00 PM
well its hard for things to get any worse!

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