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Poetic Form: Curtal Sonnet
Inspired: 2024 February 05
Image: Morning by The Upper Room
The Upper Room
Apathy meets and coldly cells and rounds me, A warm smile ills none than shape perfect eights, Abrupt shadows the wall chilled seemingly unmoved, Bold shades lightly now a pool of brightness forming, Basking moments restyling event the wholeness takes, Bound to its duty to make a welcoming change so smooth, Cast away those hours that forced your eyes shut, Claim and conquer the juncture be the consequence makes, Comes the time for eyes to feel the fullness of hospitable soothe, Do justice to this righteous morning and fulfill your destiny whatnot, Improved.

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Date: 2/5/2024 4:25:00 PM
wasn't at all familiar with this form, but I like what you've done...so creative with some distinctive imagery. Your poem is a great 'hurry and wake up' poem---do justice to the morn. Outstanding work, have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 2/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
Hi, Sara. There seems to be no reference to syllables other than the last/line 11 having two syllables, or structure (iambic ...) other than a rhyme scheme. Tis a shot in the dark--methinks, thanks. Aloha, William

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