The Concert

It was a summery San Francisco evening.
Dressed in tight jeans, I was the modern mother
taking my daughter to the first and last concert of our youthful days together.
Though we sat back in the general admission seats of a huge amphitheater,
the excitement all around us was palpable.
The audience, mostly women, screamed with delight
each time we heard the first few notes of our heartthrob’s songs
exploding, immediately recognizable, from the speakers
strategically placed around us.

The sky began to darken as lights played upon the stage,
enhancing our idol’s chiseled features on the wide screen above us..
No longer able to contain ourselves, most of us were on our feet.
As the beat from the band pulsated through us, body and soul,
we became a mass of swaying flesh, uniting ourselves
with this enthralling performer in the only way we knew how.
Unable to stop, I let the music guide my hips inside those skinny jeans
 as I stood there grooving to hit after hit after hit!

That night I was sexy, free, and forever young,
and I was one with them all 
                                               in  pop rock paradise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Hear you on this one took our son to his first rock concert . love phyl
Fraser Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Love it Andrea, I felt I was there as I read through your poem. Congrats on your win, James :)
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:03 PM
nice win
Wigley Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:31 PM
I bet you've still got the poster on the inside of your closet door. Come on- admit it. Great write, Andrea, and congrats from Viv (still a spotty adolescent on the inside) x
Konos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:10 PM
sexy skinny jeans wiggled your hips. this time, into the winners circle. CONGRATULATIONS...
May Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:31 PM
A great write about wonderful memories, Andrea! Congrats on your awesome win! Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:26 PM
congratulations Andrea on this winning concert write, well done.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 1:48 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 6:02 PM
an exceptional pen Andrea so nice to share it with your daughter treasure the memory hugs 7
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Forgot to ask, who's the heartthrob?
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:16 PM
I remember those days...feeling young and free with the energy of the music taking on a life of its own. When I go to a concert, I still get that feeling. It's pure joy and you captured it! Hugs, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 2:24 AM
What a great memory to have Andrea. Magical moments like this stay with us forever. Beautifully written , capturing the excitement of the concert......kind regards----John
Devnath  Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 12:50 PM
A sweet memory of youth beautifully expressed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Davis Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 9:01 AM
They grow up fast...and we grow up faster (well, sort of ;-) )
Macfarlane Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 7:22 PM
What an awesome write and memory you have shared with us : ) ....you'll always be forever young. Hugs
May Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 5:15 PM
You became one with the music ...A rocking good write Andrea...best wishes...
Carter Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 10:10 AM
The last part is awesome!!! This was a very smooth and well written poem. I definitely enjoyed it
Horsman Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 3:08 PM
been there done that,,thanks for the memories, Andrea, wonderful poem..
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 11:43 PM
So what was the idol's name? How cool that you got to enjoy that experience with your daughter.
Anish Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Reminds me of the many rock concerts I attended when was younger - including the Kinks, the Grateful Dead, the Jefferson Airplane, and the Moody Blues. I have a poem similar to this one - "For the Rockers". I enjoyed this. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Austin Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Groovy. Son, Arthur, did a concert and a recording recently with The Grateful Dead. He had a ball, but, being by polar, got carried away and worried his wife, Donna. I thought the Grateful Dead had died long ago, but no. Love, daver
Kapoor Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:52 AM
The Concert may have ended that night or next morning but the colors of that vibrant programme which made you looking younger and beautiful (sexy) and would stay here on these pages dear friend as a beautiful sketch of that scene in which Carrie Richards too was witness of this grand happening. Love and best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:24 PM
It is very possible, I have been in that very same crowd !! So you were the blond sitting in front of me, in those sexy skinny jeans?? !! I was the one screaming behind you!!
La France Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Andrea, love this, so visual that I felt I was there with you, well written 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, s&s
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