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The Compliment by Max Burchett

The Compliment by Max Burchett

by Max Burchett

Lots of flattery and L.A. handshakes given,
But once upon a time, actually just last year,
A seemingly casual compliment was for me heaven,
One I will always remember.

Though I kept it to myself,
Not sure the reason for that,
Yet sometimes I think about it.
A great man said to an audience, some I knew,

“If I were in a battle,
I would want Max and his brother
In the foxhole with me.”
Although perhaps better said about another.

Yet, when I think it might be better
To give it up, just let it be,
Then I remember, January to December,
That comment about me.

Maybe it is that saying about woman and man,
I am what I think
Others think
I am.

If that is what someone
Of his stature thinks of me,
That is what I must be,
Rather, I must somehow make it be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Hey Max where are you? You haven't posted in a while. Come back and visit us sometimes. This is really a humbling Poem. It is an honest statement that many would not make because of their pride. I can appreciate your truth and I am favoring this sincere, honest write of yours. Thank you for sharing, and do not forget to visit us soon. God bless you...
Manley Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:13 AM
So what makes you Foxhole roomie worthy? What are your core values this person attaches to? Inquiring minds. Nice poem!
Agustin Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."
John Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Great one to make us think, Max. I like this one.
Van Eeden Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:55 AM
We have to make it be, how else could it be our truth and not anothers? It gives us resilience to get up and fight From morn until dusk And rest another night. Great to appreciate a compliment for what it was, recognition. Keep up the food heart fight. Nick
Turner Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 2:22 AM
I don't know, Max. People aren't always who they appear to be and being someone your not is a role for fools and actors. Compliments stroke the ego. You know deep inside who you are. If the shoe fits, wear it! Nice poem:)
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