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the comfort of rainbows

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You can only spend so many hours in labs, study groups and classrooms - under relentless, fluorescent lighting - before you start feeling life withdrawal. When I hit that stresshold, I need to rebalance myself. I could go to the New Haven harbor - I find the ocean endlessly relaxing - or for a quick fix, I can always rely on the warmth of multicolored product packaging. For the last one, a grocery store will do. I’ll walk the bright, prismatic cereal aisle, and run my finger gently along the gratuitous, rainbowed variety of selections. It’s a soothing gesture that I repeat several times. A reminder that there are still beautiful, shiny things out there, on demand, in the uncomplicated, non-academic world.

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Date: 2/28/2024 9:57:00 AM
... In your school uniform you look so charming, but underneath, you're quite alarming.
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Chris Con
Date: 2/28/2024 4:46:00 PM
It's from a song titled SnowWhite.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/28/2024 4:20:00 PM
Fun line, but it’s been a while since I wore a school uniform. =]
Date: 2/26/2024 4:18:00 PM
Dear Anais, Your poem beautifully captures the feeling of needing a break from the academic grind. It highlights the power of simple things to bring a sense of joy and escape. The act of running your fingers along the cereal boxes, a "soothing gesture," adds a layer of sensory detail and emphasizes the quiet mindfulness in finding beauty in the everyday. Anais this unique and heartwarming perspective on finding comfort in unexpected places. - Blessings, Daniel
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/26/2024 4:55:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful analysis =]
Date: 2/26/2024 3:20:00 PM
cathartic, introspective - nicely expressed this
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/26/2024 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, Mat =]

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