The Color of Love

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How to describe the color of love?  Might you frown in surprise if I spoke of brown?  Dull, pockmarked, ocherous brown. 
A tarmac of grain, stained the color of earth, that never saw rain.  
One humble old table, from an oak that would fall.  Who could have known the 
moments recalled?

Just a scarred weathered plank, with a warp in the middle. Blight she would hide with a bright checkered cloth.  Those who would sit, night after night, greeting with eyes, meeting with ears,... filling the gaps with laughter and tears 

Decades were spent, over string beans, and potatoes, bridging the gap of a mid-day mishap, a chat after school, or a new family rule.
Resurrecting a family, at the end of the day, while chomping away on unidentifiable casseroles, that filled the belly, as well as the soul.
Consuming wisdom and  noodles, in the comfort of home. 

Who would have noticed this shabby antique, wearing wax from Crayolas,  white coffee cup rings. Ink spots, and dings. And three winking holes made by father's misdeed! 
(His picture-frame project,  misjudging the nails! Three slender digits pierced in without fail!  Hammered tight, to the top. While mother's shot through the roof! 

Who could have ever guessed that a well-worn, weathered old piece of grainy brown oak could be the glorious color of love?


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/4/2013 6:42:00 PM
Congrad's Carrie, we love those dear old things! Light & Love
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:28:00 PM
One of my favorites so far.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie.
Date: 12/3/2013 6:08:00 PM
awesome, CARRIE. And big congrats.
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Date: 12/3/2013 3:50:00 PM
At the top or near the top as is your usual Carrie (I'm SO jealous) I hope you still got that table! This reminds me of my grandma-in-law's(?) table ...We called her Granny Rat (It's a long story) She NEVER stopped cooking and when you came to visit she started loading you down with food on an old wobbly table with one of those cheap, plastic covers...Best smothered green beans EVER, and at Christmas? You can imagine...
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 12/3/2013 3:58:00 PM
We called her Granny Rat because she called her grandchildren her "little rats" and she had a slew of them...When my wife was approaching marrying age, her advice for her honeymoon night was: 'Wash everything possible, then wash possible'....
Date: 12/3/2013 2:32:00 PM
ohhh, if this table could just talk...big congrats on your winning spot, carrie.. hugggs
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:30:00 PM
Just wonderful, as usual. congrats. BG
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:28:00 PM
very good Carrie congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/3/2013 1:25:00 PM
Lovely , well done Carrie xx
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Date: 11/19/2013 3:45:00 PM
Excellent!! Exactly what I would consider to be the type of material this contest called for. I loved the many times spent around our table too, but it was formica and not a nice wooden one. a very small table for a big family!!
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Date: 11/17/2013 10:40:00 AM
This is another excellent and outstanding write of yours my very dear friend Carrie. Ordinary things with sentimental values/ memories are turned to be extra-ordinary. Kudos to u on this stellar poem. TYSM for sharing your precious gem with me. TYSM as well for your very inspiring congratulatory comment on my poem diamante. My hearty congrats also on your recent wins. Sorry if I can't go & congratulate on ur winning piece by now 'cuz of time constraint. I'll be back ok. love lots & big hugs Leo
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Date: 11/16/2013 10:14:00 PM
WOW,,, Carrie, some thought down on print... xox..PD
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:42:00 PM
Nice memories of the ordinary old table with expressive words, Carrie
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Date: 11/16/2013 5:51:00 PM
This is a perfect entry, you made the ordinary become extraordinary, super ordinary! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious write this evening my friend! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/16/2013 5:43:00 PM
† This Beautiful Touching Painting, Is Why I Have Always Truly Loved Your Wonderful Poetry, Sweet Beautiful Carrie Richards ˜ Since We First Laid Eyes Upon Your Splendours, We Knew That Your Poetic Gift As Heart, Was Quite Uniquely Special! ˜ I Find An Old Country Road Her Withered, Run Down Tattered House; Filled With This Warmth, Of Love ˜ Greater Than Any Mansion Littered By Emptiness ? I Am Going To Favour Your Beautiful Painting ˜ Love Always, John
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