The Cold Tears of Clouds

At dusk one remembers
the bleak solitude
of sunless clouds and dark sea;
in mid-altitude
winds lash them and wheeze...
as trees are being drenched with   
the cold tears of clouds.



Entered in nette onclaud's contest,
" Wonder Of Dusk In Seguilla "
Written by Andrew Crisci
on 9/28/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 9, 2012 at 11:54 AM
andrew... a winner in my heart ; just wondering what happened with your rhyme scheme??.. this is a gem.. :)hugggs!
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