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The Clod

faith in God good 4 the bod, in ever seeking wonder, hook line and sinker slightly odd, the passion seeks the thunder, but this oaf is just a clod, from way south, the land of sweet dowunder. re: 'a lovers quarrell' Debbie Duncan Don

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/17/2012 12:56:00 AM
fine write, don.. we can agree to disagree!...i like the emotional feel of this piece... winning huggs! :)
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:21:00 PM
Hi Don... one can quarrell... one can sleep. Sweet thoughts for Debbie.... always...pd
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Date: 7/16/2012 5:35:00 PM
This is a spectacular write, and, haha, humorous as well my friend! You have a wonderful sense of humor Don! And I don't view you as a clod, but it makes for a wondrous write! Tremendous poem, Great Work!!
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