The Clearing

I learned a new thing about trees.
Do take care when you cut them down.
For flies will enter with the breeze
Into a home from the cleared ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Good to know.
Greenhough Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 11:26 PM
I know now.
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Thanks for the education I didn’t know this!
Greenhough Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 8:00 PM
I didn't either. I can guess that the ground under trees is wetter and cooler. With shelter in the ground, flies can breed in safety.
Leach Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:15 PM
This hit me like a quiet truth. It reminded me how clearing out a house doesn’t just make space--it stirs up everything you thought you’d packed away. Beautiful and haunting.
Greenhough Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 7:26 PM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:50 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Clearing" write. I do not like flies. They are dirty. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away..........
Greenhough Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Thank you for your visit. A good tip is to buy protective covers that look like net tents. They fit over food to keep flies off food.
Tor Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Thanks for your message Hilda. We don't have many flies up in the mountains where I live thank God, but we have ticks, and Bears, and coyotes, and Bob cats, some say A wolf or two and even a Mountain Lion has been spotted from Canada making his way down. Hugs.
Greenhough Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 9:11 PM
Good to hear from you. We have mountain lions and deer. Hunter and prey. Also, we have owls.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Ooh…wow! When we had a good cleaning of our yard, we had a problem.
Greenhough Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 2:04 PM
You had flies, too? I guess they like shade.
Empress Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Dear Hilda, Well written poem on the challenges that come with cutting down trees, iv never noticed this but i hope you can find a solution. Is there a way to get rid of the flies maybe pest control? It must be so hard, its always nice to read your personal experiences woven in the most seamless manner with sublime rhymes! Pleasure visiting your page today. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Flies are gone. We had a windstorm and the flies were blown away. The Earth is breathing again.
Romios Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Nice to see you again. Learning is fun, isn’t it? Have a good week. Panagitota Romios..lol Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 2:03 PM
What? I'll fix it.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 10:53 AM
You have commenting turned off, so just saying hello, Pangie. ~ Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 10:52 AM
You have commenting turned off, so just saying hello, Pangie. ~ Kim
Greenhough Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 8:14 AM
I'm a little confused.
May Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 6:34 AM
We keep clearing away the trees to put up "concrete jungles"
Greenhough Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Lol. I never knew I'd face so much condemnation for cutting down these four straggle trees. I want to keep forests pristine. I was forced to cut them, I miss them, but I don't want prowlers. All who complain live in houses. ?
Hind Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 11:16 PM
I hate trees being cut down. Well said, short poem.
Greenhough Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 12:12 AM
These trees aren't the forever kind anyhow. They die young but reproduce. Not thousand years old trees.
Poet Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 11:52 AM
I too despise pruning trees, as you pointed out. In numerous ways, trees serve as sentinels. Destroying them carelessly is unacceptable. Well done Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:46 PM
I was forced into cutting these trees because a small area in front of my house needed to be open because of criminal characters. I have many more trees, as well as emerging saplings.
DiMino Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Yep, some nature is irreplaceable -- once gone, extinct!
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Neither the trees nor the flies are in danger of becoming extinct. The birds that need rooster may need more trees. I have plenty more trees for them.
George Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Your observation is right. I too have seen flies entering the house through the clearing once trees are cut down, especially during certain seasons of the year. Trees stand guard in many ways. They shouldn't be recklessly destroyed.
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 9:10 AM
I hated cutting them. My safety depends on thwarting a prowler. My husband has died and I am alone.
Singh Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 6:39 AM
The poem warns against the careless destruction of trees The consequences we are getting at present are alarming .Very Nice
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 9:09 AM
I agree, however, I had to cut some trees to get a better view. I have had an interloper prowling my home.
Rolland Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 6:24 AM
i learn something precious and quite interesting, enjoyed your poem
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 9:07 AM
Thank you.
Delegans Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Good life advice can be so poetic sometimes. Thanks for sharing, Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:53 PM
I probably wrote this in frustration. I hope they've left.
Mckeithan Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 8:35 PM
Good one Hilda. They sure do.
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:52 PM
I hope yoi enjoyed it.
Wolf Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 7:12 PM
I've learned that the world is a sadder place too...
Buehler Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 5:56 PM
Yours is advice worth remembering, Hilda. Flies are a menace! Very best wishes. :)
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Wow! I appreciate this information.
Gifford Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Hello Hilda, that’s not nice I hope they are all gone now. Thank you for sharing, I have learnt something new today. Have a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Are these trees in America? Surely, not here in Florida. Your well-written brevity lines gave me a fly freak out. Once, at least 50 flies SUDDENLY appeared in my kitchen, on our forks and plates while eating. We later figured out they had just hatched in the hefty trash bag on the kitchen floor. It was so so so gross. Obviously, I reacted from your poetry lines, felt the visual which is what a poem should do! Stay fly free ... CayCay
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Thank you for your comment. Flies, like mice, have poor hygiene. I'm sure there is a purpose for them, but I do not need them. The trees are desert Juniper in America.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:23 AM
- I learn something new by reading your poem...thank you, Hilda :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 4:01 AM
I always enjoy your visit. Thanks for reading.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 2:48 AM
That is so true. What I learned though is not to plant trees near a wall. Roots can enter and ruin the tiles. Loved your poem though.
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:59 AM
Thank you. That's a good tip..
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