The Clearing

My mind foggy with too much stress,
I chose to saunter along and imagine
pastoral scenes that I had seen.
I dreamed of fields and meadows 
all in green, painted with the colors
of the multi-hued perennial Spring.
As I walked, I felt my mind easing into
a comfortable stride with me.
We passed a calming stream
with fish and frogs and dragonflies.
Each bird sang its soliloquy
and I had only tranquil happiness, 
peaceful rhythms, and floating
clouds that billowed and shape-shifted with the wind, 
so grateful that I had found the clearing.

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Date: 2/26/2023 10:16:00 AM
I see you won with this? I hope so. Congrats.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/26/2023 10:42:00 AM
Nope, it was NA Andrea. Thanks for stopping by! :)
Date: 2/25/2023 7:50:00 AM
Such an enticing, idyllic scene. A clearing does invite "tranquil happiness." Pastoral beauty is well detailed in your fine poem. Congratulations! Brian
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/25/2023 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Brian. :)
Date: 2/23/2023 9:11:00 AM
Sounds like the perfect meditation to de-stress. Nature's sights and sounds to soothe the soul. You painted a tranquil journey that takes the readers along to the clearing. Thank you Linda for taking us there. Anne :-)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/23/2023 9:46:00 AM
Many thanks for your sweet comments Anne. :)
Date: 2/21/2023 4:52:00 PM
Loved the way you started out describing the state of perception that cleared as your minds eye focused on the external experiences about that eased you to the core.Lovely Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/21/2023 5:07:00 PM
Many thanks for your lovely thoughtful comments Vickey and for taking the time to read my work. Linda :)
Date: 2/21/2023 7:52:00 AM
truly a walk thru serenity well executed, you have a very picturesque limn of what the state of ataraxia is about....great job...
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/21/2023 9:34:00 AM
My thanks for your kind review and comments Timothy. I do love nature and often use words to convey a feeling of serene solitude. :)
Date: 2/20/2023 8:45:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/21/2023 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Always good to have you visit. :)
Date: 2/20/2023 4:11:00 PM
Great Poem Linda. Best of luck in the contest.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/20/2023 6:35:00 PM
Many thanks dear Wendy!
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