The Clearing

There is a meadow that seems to spring
      from beyond trees
            in a bordering forest
To many, it is known as "The Clearing."
To me, it's a beautiful place.
      full of tall grasses of lavender and gold,
            depending on the season.
Its bounty includes colorful wildflowers--
      red, pink, lilac, gold, large and tiny
            and bird songs to wake the new day.
I wonder: has it always worn blossoms and grass?
Or did long ago, trees, mighty and tall, grow
      until they fell to fires and drought
            and Time reclaimed their seasonal pass.
It stands alone now, unknown the reason
      A many-hued break between the pines
             Beautiful and strong
And no one seems to mind
      that it has no trees.

February 13, 2023
for "The Clearing Poetry Contest"
by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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February 26, 2023 at 3:55 PM
That's a mighty nice clearing you describe Ann. Your words are inviting and you add a bit of mystery about it which I like. It gets the reader wondering. Yes very nice.
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March 7, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Thank you, Merv, for your nice comments!
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February 26, 2023 at 8:42 AM
reading this poem paints a vivid, beautiful picture in my mind - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
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March 7, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. And, congratulations to you on First place!
Alex Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 8:03 PM
"And no one seems to mind that it has no trees" - A great poem. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:42 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
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February 25, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations, Ann, for the winning achievement; your poem on clearing is so lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! :)
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February 25, 2023 at 7:34 AM
I love to come to clearings when on walks through the woods Ann. They seem to team with life that doesn't mind if one watches in awe and wonder as you've so well-described. Congratulations on your win. :)
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:50 PM
It was a clearing outside of Cloudcroft, NM. We used to go by it often--so lovely.
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February 17, 2023 at 6:58 AM
It almost reads like a metaphor for a mindset Ann. A lovely read. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thanks, Gary. Yes, I think it is a mindset of a soothing place for the mind to frequent in trying times! I appreciate your comments :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:29 PM
this was a great pleasure to read. i sure hope i can get inspired to try one.
Peck Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! A place far from life's noise!
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February 15, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Ann, differences abandon many to wonder, albeit, splendor extends acceptance of a Clearing, nicely done, Aloha, William
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Thank you for your nice comments, William!
Peck Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Thanks for your nice comments, William! Probably the trees were cut down to build homes, but I'd rather it was nature that removed them :) Aloha!
May Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Flowers and bird songs makes the Clearing a beautiful place, ell penned Ann
Peck Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, Joseph!
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February 13, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Its amazing how many places, have been labelled may years ago, even century, maybe your poem, was the start of just that, a clearing of trees to make for a place for pasture for cows sheep etc. Anyhow i digress, from as usual your insightful poetry, so lovely, i think Craig may like this...Harry
Peck Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Dear Harry, Thank you for your thoughts, as always so thoughtful. I wrote about a real meadow in the mountains. I used to imagine living in a small house in the midst of that lovely meadow.
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February 13, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Very nice . It reminds me of a clearing near here :)
Peck Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Heidi. There are probably many such clearings. I hope it doesn't mean the trees were cleared on purpose, but they might have been built into homes...
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February 13, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Were the trees cleared off? Pity, because trees are important. They are truly useful.
Peck Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:48 AM
I hope they weren't, Victor. But it always seemed strange in the midst of a forest.
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February 13, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Anne, You have captured deep, deep meanings in your calming thoughts. thx, think we all need your wisdom. appreciate you, suzanne
Peck Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Dear Suzanne, I look forward to your comments because you are always so kind. :) love you.
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