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The Clearing

Does this mean, like morning chores, cleaning up around? Or does this, like grave-depths, has concept more profound? Cleaning up the courtyards are perfectly okay, Should we not, for love and justice, give more way? Thorns and bushes should be removed, indeed, Should we not clear from within every little weed? Like slaves, often, in chains of habits, we have been, Many ups and downs and rises and falls we have seen; When the physique is cleared of all illnesses, Shouldn't the soul too comprehensive healing possess? Shouldn't the anger that, as a wildfire, suddenly breaks out, Surrender to peace and harmony, within, with no doubt; Shouldn't fear, resentment, frustration, and anxiety likewise, Blossom forth into confidence, contentment, and satisfaction wise; Just like the slate of a student is often cleansed, Shouldn't my screen of the mind, be bush-free, and de-fenced? Like fogs and mists of winter mornings swept away by the sun, Shouldn't inner weaknesses, by divine grace, shun? Clearance, thus, has volumes mountainous speak, Equilibrium in thoughts, words, and actions to reach its peak...!!! 13 February 2023 The Clearing Poetry Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish

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Date: 3/1/2023 3:08:00 PM
Interesting take on a clearing. Indeed, we need to clear, to expunge that which is toxic within ourselves. Congratulations on posting such an original piece. Cheers Brian
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Date: 3/1/2023 8:25:00 AM
I love this a lot. General clearing from external to internal-that refers to our inner being/soul and mind. Excellent poetry my dear friend. Big Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 3:10:00 PM
A very thought-provoking poem, Christuraj, with some outstanding lines. And we do need to clear our minds and bodies, and the world! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:16:00 PM
Just as our external surroundings need cleaning from time to time, our mind and inner self also need cleaning to keep our mind filled with positive emotions. A poem so profound . Congratulations on your great win Chris !
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:40:00 AM
a deep and different take on the theme, with some lovely lines - congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations, Alex, on the winning achievement; your poem on clearing is so lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/25/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/25/2023 7:16:00 AM
I love this Chris. Well-writtena and well-deserved placement! Congratulations on your win. :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/25/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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