The Class Bully

After twenty years the class bully, Mitch
Still takes my lunch money, without a hitch
Though this is still true
I'll give him his due
He sure makes a great Subway sandwich!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hinshaw Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Pat, I love great lims and this is a great one! Gave me the laugh of the day! Glad you enjoyed the mouse, cat, cheese write. I love cheese but as you mentioned, I get all bound up in it at times as well! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Thanks Bob! I've loved limericks since I was in school. Introduced to poetry in a creative writing class I took, I think they are fun to write and being a puzzle lover as well, I find telling a story in such a short form is intriguing! Best to you as well............. pat
Faulkner Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:25 PM
At least it wasn't Jared...
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Yeah! Again karma is a bitch!! (Definitely had it coming in that case!).................pat
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 9:23 PM
LOL! Great, Pat!
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Thanks Kim, I do appreciate that!!!..........pat
Gauthier Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Love this, Pat. Nice to know there is some justice for bullies.
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Karma is a bitch, I think is the saying!!.......80)
Wanter Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Might as well laugh about it, huh, Pat?
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:31 PM
The best medicine supposedly!..........80)
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 6:04 PM
oh so funny in so many ways Pat - got to say I detest the smell of Subway so if my antagonist Jackie was working in there she would never get my money!:-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Well, things like that work out in the long run, though at the time it doesn't feel like it ever will!! Thanks for comment Jan!..........80)
Laurie Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 5:32 PM
G'day Pat … Great! You got me well and truly - well done - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Thanks Lindsay!...................pat
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