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The Class Bully

After twenty years the class bully, Mitch Still takes my lunch money, without a hitch Though this is still true I'll give him his due He sure makes a great Subway sandwich!

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/16/2018 5:32:00 PM

Pat, I love great lims and this is a great one! Gave me the laugh of the day! Glad you enjoyed the mouse, cat, cheese write. I love cheese but as you mentioned, I get all bound up in it at times as well! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Pat Adams
Date: 11/17/2018 3:48:00 PM

Thanks Bob! I've loved limericks since I was in school. Introduced to poetry in a creative writing class I took, I think they are fun to write and being a puzzle lover as well, I find telling a story in such a short form is intriguing! Best to you as well............. pat

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/13/2018 2:25:00 PM

At least it wasn't Jared...

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:37:00 PM

Yeah! Again karma is a bitch!! (Definitely had it coming in that case!).................pat

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/12/2018 9:23:00 PM

LOL! Great, Pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I do appreciate that!!!..........pat

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2018 6:49:00 PM

Love this, Pat. Nice to know there is some justice for bullies.

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:31:00 PM

Karma is a bitch, I think is the saying!!.......80)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/12/2018 6:30:00 PM

Might as well laugh about it, huh, Pat?

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:31:00 PM

The best medicine supposedly!..........80)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2018 6:04:00 PM

oh so funny in so many ways Pat - got to say I detest the smell of Subway so if my antagonist Jackie was working in there she would never get my money!:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:30:00 PM

Well, things like that work out in the long run, though at the time it doesn't feel like it ever will!! Thanks for comment Jan!..........80)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/12/2018 5:32:00 PM

G'day Pat … Great! You got me well and truly - well done - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 11/13/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay!...................pat