The Chubby Kid

Ah, who dares to call him a big bear,
when he eats a chocolate eclair?
He drops it on his red shoes,
to hear the pigeon's coos...
then smears it all over his brown hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Andrew. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrew
George   Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Very funny picture you have painted with this limerick, Andrew. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 9:34 PM
What a funny kid he must be! Congratulatoins on this interesting little limerick i had not yet seen. So you ARE in NewYork. I am sure you must have told me that before! LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 8:15 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this creative write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Calhoun Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 7:46 PM
As Yogi would say: "YO! BOO-BOO!" A fun read. Congrats on your WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
Dufresne Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:58 PM
congrats to you on your Chubby Kid win Andrew!
Johnson Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations Andrew. Love, Joyce
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:44 AM
Great and apt images to describe the chubby kid, Andrew
Mannan Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:52 PM
So cute Andrew. Love the image.
Poetry Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:08 PM
great little write!
A   Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 7:32 PM
lol cute write, enjoyed your limerick,..p.d.
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