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The Charm of French Class

i become a stone,
   still a leader,
but translation
transforms me,
   as i learn
      “le crayon est rouge.”

“Je m’appelle Chantal.”
enchanted by my “nom français.”
a shy child, changed by her name.

my friend and i
on different sides.
she’s critical of Madame Gold.
   i rather enjoy
      the running jump
         into “Lac d’Aiguebelette.”*

we whisper fun, of one boy,
with the crooked nose.
      i lose my charm
   an anchor
clinging to the radiator.

french class particularly enchanting
as if we travel across the vast sea —
explore the Louvre and Eiffel Tower,
the catacombs and Notre Dame.

crèpes in class
tastier than home ec.
Madame Gold calls on Kat-a-leen.
She’s not happy, a bit.

but i smile, and wait a long long while
before i visit, for real, the city of lights.

now in my sixties, i learn much more
of the sordid history of Paris
and its close-by venture to Versaille.

but all our hometown places
have their secrets, their horrors,
their orgies, and battles.

God keeps beauty in the steeple
and the turquoise sky and the lake
reminding me of “paradis.”**

french class, history — a loft
for an awkward child.
perhaps that’s why Madame Gold
was so enchanting,
not a bit of a witch like Kathleen thought.

2/25/2021

Lac d’Aiguebelette pronounced “lack-day-boo-lette”
Paradis pronounced “pear-a-dee”
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Pettit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Cette poeme est tres jolie! J'etudie dans la lycee pour trois annes.
Devonshire Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Oh, you took me back to Miss Amond's high school french class, Kim. Love the creative way you included so many French words. A delight to read! Hugs, Carolyn
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Merci Beaucoup, mon amie! xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 8:25 AM
I prefer the Architecture, also the streets are narrower which for me adds to the Ambiance.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:32 PM
I would love to see it!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 3:10 PM
What a splendid read. I enjoyed Paris but must confess I preferred Rome.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 7:13 PM
I’ve never been to Rome. Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 9:49 AM
I studied French for four years and forgot all about it. We had bad teachers. May they rest in peace.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Too bad!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 6:23 AM
I love this!!! A true beauty... so brilliantly penned. A whisper of music that gently comforts with it's sincere breath of inspiration and hope... a wonderful wonder you've left us - God bless you sweet friend... with love and prayers, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thank you, Regina! I appreciate you, my friend! God bless!
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