The Chagrin

- A catfish, a catfish!
- It’s not.
- Why?
- It’s a king of catfishes! Good for you. Ok, put its Majesty in the boat.
The boat is anchored at the edge of the shallow water.
I, seven years old, knee-deep in water, drag my first big catfish, holding its slimy gills in my arms raised over my head, but the fishtail feels the water and, having knocked me down with a powerful strike, the king legs it…
I grew up, I caught a lot of kings, but even on the brink of death I will feel the chagrin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Marcum Wong Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 3:50 PM
A beautiful memory that you will always have tucked in the back of your mind Kurt. Congratulations on your deserving wonderful First Place win! : ) xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 3:44 AM
I am watching that giant catfish give you a smack with her tail, and swimming off. Furious because you called her a King. She was a Queen! Love it!
Ravidas Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Catfish is a noun of masculine gender in Russian: he has mustache)
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:59 PM
The drama of life through the eyes of a proud seven-year-old! ~ Never Say Die!
Ravidas Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Never. Thanks, Wolf)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Love the last line! Emphasizes the whole!
Ravidas Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Kim)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace