The Castle

There is a castle standing still.
Where blood was shed
to protect our free will.
When foreign foes 
dared trespass,
we kicked their ass.
There is castle standing still.
Where wine flowed free
and pigs were killed.
To celebrate our victory.
Music and dance all night long.
Loud bursts of song.
There is a castle standing still.
Named Dun na nGall.
Where Maeve was thrilled
to wed the high chief Fegal.
Ulster and Connacht
united as one.
Slan agus beannacht.
There is a castle standing still.
Not derelict or overgrown.
Where visitors can mill.
See steps worn down
by passing feet.
Soldiers on the beat.
Forever now asleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Jean, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
Murray Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:13 PM
As always, thank you Linda.
Rycroft Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Well written congrats xxxx
Murray Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Thank you Wendy.
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Murray Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Thank you BL. There are loads of castles in Ireland and our folklore is rich with them.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations Jean on the placement of the contest.
Murray Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Nayda. It's always thrilling to win a placement.
Bauer Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 5:09 PM
i like this poem very much, jean (especially the "kicked their ass" line!). i have to travel very far to get to see a castle and once went on a vacation with my son (he was in high school) to scotland and wales just to see castles. we both loved that trip...
Murray Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 5:30 PM
I did 1,000 miles in Scotland once Ilene. They have some beautiful ones there. Glad to know you liked my kicking ass castle.
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 3:01 PM
- Great written, Jean - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.
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