The Cardinal and the Rose

Light snow hushes the drab, winter sky
as she places a small white rose upon
the gravestone of her innocent one
lost in the early bloom of dawn. 

A singular chirping song resounds 
within drooping arms of frozen trees
she spies a sprightly cardinal bird
flitting like a red ribbon in the breeze. 

Her silent tears fall, like white petals spun
her grief is laid bare by the rose’s thorns
when wings of a pure red cardinal come
to carry her rose away towards the sun. 











1/7/2023

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Date: 3/19/2023 5:50:00 AM
A bittersweet scene! Well written, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/20/2023 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 3/17/2023 10:00:00 PM
So lovely and profound. The melancholy of loss is enhanced by the snow and frozen trees, but the mourner sees a glimmer of hope as the cardinal flies the rose sunward, echoing the journey of the little one's soul toward heaven. So beautiful and a Fav for me. Hugs ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2023 12:01:00 PM
Hi John! Thanks for stopping by! So happy you liked this poem and I am honored that you faved it! :)
Date: 3/4/2023 1:55:00 AM
This is a great but very poignant read Lara. Its as if you have directed the opening scene from a film with your words. A great use of the title too. Cheers - Gary
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/9/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Gary. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 1/18/2023 7:44:00 PM
So mournful and poignant, Laura, this brings a tear, and the last line brings a sliver of comfort~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/22/2023 9:26:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Michelle. Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 1/17/2023 2:07:00 PM
Laura, this grief and hope is written with an elegant pen - just the right touch. It is one I will remember for its grace. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of song and grace to you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. appreciate your kind words! :)
Date: 1/14/2023 1:18:00 PM
Heartfelt poem but so lovely to allow us to share. Best for a win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2023 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Date: 1/8/2023 11:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem, so touching and heartfelt ! All the best in the contest dear Laura !
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/9/2023 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/9/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Date: 1/8/2023 4:21:00 AM
Beautiful, the cardinal is the carrier of her grieving love:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/8/2023 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jo! :)
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