The Cardinal and the Rose

Light snow hushes the drab, winter sky
as she places a small white rose upon
the gravestone of her innocent one
lost in the early bloom of dawn. 

A singular chirping song resounds 
within drooping arms of frozen trees
she spies a sprightly cardinal bird
flitting like a red ribbon in the breeze. 

Her silent tears fall, like white petals spun
her grief is laid bare by the rose’s thorns
when wings of a pure red cardinal come
to carry her rose away towards the sun. 











1/7/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 5:50 AM
A bittersweet scene! Well written, Laura!
Leiser Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Kim! Glad you liked this one! :)
Watt Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:00 PM
So lovely and profound. The melancholy of loss is enhanced by the snow and frozen trees, but the mourner sees a glimmer of hope as the cardinal flies the rose sunward, echoing the journey of the little one's soul toward heaven. So beautiful and a Fav for me. Hugs ~ John
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Hi John! Thanks for stopping by! So happy you liked this poem and I am honored that you faved it! :)
Radice Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:55 AM
This is a great but very poignant read Lara. Its as if you have directed the opening scene from a film with your words. A great use of the title too. Cheers - Gary
Leiser Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Thank you for commenting, Gary. I really appreciate it! :)
Faulkner Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 7:44 PM
So mournful and poignant, Laura, this brings a tear, and the last line brings a sliver of comfort~
Leiser Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Thank you for commenting, Michelle. Glad you liked this one! :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Laura, this grief and hope is written with an elegant pen - just the right touch. It is one I will remember for its grace. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of song and grace to you.
Leiser Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. appreciate your kind words! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Heartfelt poem but so lovely to allow us to share. Best for a win.
Leiser Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Thank you, Victor! :)
George Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 11:04 PM
Beautiful poem, so touching and heartfelt ! All the best in the contest dear Laura !
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January 9, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
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January 9, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Daniel Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Beautiful, the cardinal is the carrier of her grieving love:)
Leiser Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Jo! :)
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