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The Caravan of Stars

Along the road where moonbeams spill, the gypsy wagons wander still. Their lanterns swing like fireflies caught, each wheel a whisper, each song a thought. The fiddler hums a ghostly tune, that weaves beneath the weeping moon. A tambourine keeps time with dreams, and horses wade through silver streams. No map can mark the path they tread, no stone remembers where they led. They chase the winds, they court the skies, with fortune shining in their eyes. And if you chance to hear their song, it means your heart won't rest for long. For once you glimpse the roaming stars, your soul will follow gypsy scars.

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Date: 5/1/2025 10:39:00 AM
I enjoy your unique poem. It shows great love for people who find home wherever it takes them. I send a big thumbs up for your powerful originality.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Hilda. Your words truly touched me--this poem came from a deep place of reverence for those wandering souls who carry their home within. I'm so grateful you felt the heart behind it and honored by your kind encouragement. Warmest wishes, Alesia
Date: 4/27/2025 7:17:00 PM
Skillfully concise storytelling here Alesia. "A tambourine keeps time with dreams, and horses wade through silver streams..." Nice synergy between sound, imagery and meaning, all moving naturally together. The final verse is strong! This could make a wonderful painting as well. Stars shone on tinder throne, polished bone as precious stone, what matters is our souls grown... that's my gypsy song for you Poetess...J.A.B.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:44:00 AM
Justin, your words are like a tambourine echoing back the rhythm of the poem--what a gift. I’m so touched by your gypsy song; it reads like it was born from the same starlit road. Thank you for feeling the heartbeat behind the imagery, and for always responding with such poetic grace. With admiration and thanks, Alesia

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