The Captain's Cry

Cries form a simple, earnest plea
From this vessel formed of earthen clay,
Seeking solace from the sea
Of trouble spawned as devils play.

From this vessel formed of earthen clay
Hope rises slowly to quench the squall,
Of trouble spawned as devils play
While gales strike the mast to make it fall.

Hope rises slowly to quench the squall
As a salty fountain bathes a weathered face,
While gales strike the mast to make it fall
And sails hang tattered in their place.

As a salty fountain bathes a weathered face
Bitterness rolls heavy upon the waves,
And sails hang tattered in their place
While many vessels sink into their graves.

Bitterness rolls heavy upon the waves
Seeking solace from the sea,
While many vessels sink into their graves,
Cries form a simple, earnest plea.



-by Virginia Mitchell

For Contest: Pantoum 

Sponsor: Paula Swanson 


Virginia Mitchell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Virginia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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August 3, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Congrats Virginia on "The Captains Cry" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Virginia. Love, Carol
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July 31, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Congrats Virginia on your featured poem this week on PS... nice one to share with luv..
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December 27, 2010 at 5:47 PM
This is an excellent example of a pantoum poem. Good luck to you in the contest.
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:24 AM
Many congrats Virginia for ranked 1st in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your win Virginia in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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December 12, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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December 12, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Virginia, Congratulations on your Ist Place Win in the contest! Enjoy! Peace and love, Audrey
Funk Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Very Nice! I read this on more than one level.
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December 12, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Coming from a family of seafarers, I could relate to the anxiety of the captain in this awesom pantoum, Virginia. So deserving of the top place in Paula's contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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December 12, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Congrats Virginia on your first place win in Paula's Pantoum contest with this elegant write and win.. enjoy with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Lovely write..I could feel the tempest. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Radke Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:20 AM
This is a great pantoum. How perfectly you have turned the lines into telling the story. Congratulations on winning the contest. Your poem is wonderful.
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved first place win in the contest of Paula, Virginia
Sweetheart Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful entry for Paula's contest Virginia.. a great theme u have chosen ...good luck my friend.. and have a Happy Thanksgiving..
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