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"The Captain did not rescue me from the sea
He remade the sea around me."

- Poet

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The Captain and the Chrysolite

Verse 1
Pink lavender honeyed skies swallowed the day
then we fly through a banyan tree
to admire an air plant without soil on display
a turquoise cocoon burst forth at noon
seeking out the nectar of an incoming flower
unreckoned and true

Chorus
O Captain, pay the ransom, for I am lost
thrown into the sea without bottom or shore
constantly treading the vilest of waters
ankle-deep, knee-deep, waist-deep, neck-deep Lord
guided by galaxies, formed by your mountains
lavished in radiance I cannot afford
O Captain, pay the ransom, for I am forlorn

Verse 2
through arabah wasteland to engedi's shoreline
where eneglaim waits at the edge of the deep
the slaves by birth rising in filthy rags wading
into waters too wide and too holy to keep
leaves will not wither and fruit will still flourish
and herbs will heal everything exiled in me
jasper and sapphire and pearl at the threshold
where the dead brine drinks till its currents run free

Chorus
O Captain, pay the ransom, for I am lost
thrown into the sea without bottom or shore
constantly treading the vilest of waters
ankle-deep, knee-deep, waist-deep, neck-deep Lord
guided by galaxies, formed by your mountains
lavished in radiance I cannot afford
O Captain, pay the ransom, for I am forlorn

Verse 3
no longer roaming the vilest of waters
the ransom was paid at the turn of the tide
carnelian burning like embers inside me
chrysolite green where the filthy rags died
beryl and topaz and chrysoprase dawning
amethyst jacinth and ruby my name
emerald and onyx where filthy rags clothed me
I flew through the banyan tree never the same

Chorus
O Captain, You paid the ransom when I was lost
thrown into the sea without bottom or shore
no longer treading the vilest of waters
ankle-deep, knee-deep, waist-deep no more Lord
guided by galaxies formed by Your mountains
lavished in radiance I could not afford
O Captain, You paid the ransom when I was forlorn

Outro
leaves will not wither
fruit will flourish
herbs will heal
unreckoned, uncontained,
mysteriously free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Anaya Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:54 PM
Colorful are the sea gems eye catching, as an assurance , for salvation and a blissful beginning after the storm, and a beautiful sea it shall be. Made with love, Daniel from your faithful heart and selfless soul. A journey to anticipate, Ty for sharing dear friend. Blessings
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:19 AM
Dear Anaya, your words touched me deeply. I love how you saw the sea gems as assurances, little signs of salvation after the storm. You always read with such tenderness and clarity. Thank you for feeling the heart behind this piece and for offering such kindness in return. Blessings, Daniel
George Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 2:51 AM
At the outset, let me say, I have fallen in love with your quote. God does wonders for us, though it may not be in the way we ask. When our vessel is about to drown in the rising waves, we cry out to the captain. He stretches out his hands to save us. If he doesn't immediately respond to our plea, we have a right to repeatedly ask, as he has paid his life as ransom. We will be harbored in a world of bliss at the end. A total transformation awaits us..from rough stones to shining gems.This hope gives us the strength to face all storms of life. A lovely lyric. Love the chorus much. Your way of handling even a spiritual truth is so beautiful without being openly didactic or religious.
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:21 AM
Dear Valsa, your reflections always reach straight into the heart of the piece. I love how you traced the movement from drowning to being remade, that is exactly the arc I hoped would rise through the imagery. Your insight about the transformation from rough stones to shining gems is beautiful and so true to the Captain’s way with us. Thank you for reading with such depth and tenderness. Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 1:20 PM
Nice quote! I wish I could hear the music for this! Well done! Enjoyed getting lost in this!
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:21 AM
Dear Karen, thank you for the kind words. I smiled at your wish to hear the music, this one really did begin as a melody before it became a lyric. I’m glad you let yourself get lost in it for a moment. That means more than you know. Blessings, Daniel
Hind Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 9:40 PM
moving like water- beautiful lyric, Daniel
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:22 PM
Dear Paige, your line about the poem moving like water made me smile. You always catch the flow of a piece in such a natural way. Thank you for reading it with such openness. Blessings, Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 10:42 AM
Dear Daniel, your fantastical lyric sets a scene in an "other world" yet rings with the faith of salvation. Indeed we will not sink into the depths but are supported by the strong arms of our "Captain!" The world Jesus promises us is truly magical, filled with treasures we cannot possibly imagine. You point to such a world that Revelation points to with your amazing imagery! So glad I found this today for it has sparked a new vision for me. Thank you. Sending you blessings of spring joy!
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:23 PM
Dear Sam, your words meant a lot. I love how you saw the faith-thread running through the imagery and connected it to Revelation’s promise. Your reflections always deepen the poem for me. Blessings, Daniel
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:41 AM
I love this one, Daniel, and to me, this feels like a song about The New Heaven where the Eternal Captain, Lord Jesus Christ has saved us and clothed us in His glory:) great work:)
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:23 PM
Dear Joanna, I’m grateful you felt the New Heaven in this one. Your faith-filled reading brings such warmth, and I appreciate how you always see the heart behind the imagery. Blessings, Daniel
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June 9, 2026 at 12:33 AM
A fabulous sing-along poetic write Daniel… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:23 PM
Dear Beryl, your sing-along comment made my day. I love that the rhythm carried you, that’s exactly the spirit I hoped it would hold. Blessings, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 10:17 PM
Like a hymn but an unusually poetic one. So lovely. I especially liked that chorus and the beautiful imagery throughout the song
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:24 PM
Dear Andrea, thank you for calling it a hymn. That touched me. I’m glad the chorus and imagery spoke to you the way they did. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 12:56 PM
"The Captain and the Chrysolite" is a wonderful write for creative/fun/pretty picture. What a great quote. Love all 3. Have a fun day writing away..........
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:25 PM
Dear Paula, your kindness is always a lift. I’m glad the poem, the picture, and the quote all came together for you. Thank you for the encouragement. Blessings, Daniel
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