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The Canopy

the canopy of comfort caravan of curruption leads to a path of no return a road of self-destruction in this crowded cafeteria no creature has a table to itself and in this darkened forrest of death the canvass that shutters out the light is its shelf your soul is like a forrest without a summer and the beat that you hear has no drummer your ignorance is as vivid as abstract thoughts not yet seen and the desires that you seek are nothing more than mere illusions conveyed by dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/30/2011 10:15:00 AM
Seven All Day. I love it. and love the "Knee-Mails", You MUST trademark that one brother Castro
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:03:00 PM
"your soul is like a year without a summer"... DEEP!!! This poem is yet another awesome write! ~Beloved Faziah
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:24:00 AM
Hi John Drippin with awesome alliterations thru out, ...like the darkened forest of death and the canvas that shutters out the light. Best to you and your work, Gwendolen
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