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The Candy Charge

The pumpkin rolls eyes in the dark and bounces along. It’s uncanny how candy flounces. A boy in a hurry. Sweet teeth, they should worry. The dental charge - cavities by the ounces. 10/27/2022

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Date: 10/27/2022 10:11:00 AM
Ha! I guess it happen. I was lucky. I ate tons of candy but did not get cavities until after my first baby was born. She stole so much calcium from my teeth, I needed more than ten fillings!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2022 2:39:00 PM
Wow! Hopefully she’s good to go.
Date: 10/27/2022 9:30:00 AM
Delightful! Yea, I know...why is such evil so tasty?:) I know...moderation...right!! I've tried it...and settled for visits.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2022 2:40:00 PM
Moderation…no it must be put out of sight and mind. lol
Date: 10/27/2022 7:52:00 AM
The price of eating too many sweets. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2022 2:41:00 PM
And teeth must be flossed and brushed ;)

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