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The Cage

a statue of promises way up high lies instead of truth I still wonder how trapped in a bungalow obscured, I hide save me baby, you promised in your vows facts hide behind deception anyhow confined to your penitentiary cell magician conjuring a secret spell I still need you baby, please stop your rage when your fire is gone you send me to hell how do I survive when locked in a cage? Ten lines of 10 syllables each line rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D Total # of syllables: 100 syllables Total # of words: 73 Syllables counted from www.howmanysyllables.com Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: May 2, 2016

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Date: 5/2/2016 9:56:00 AM
~7...what a deep emotive metaphorical write Laura!!The last line screamed to me! awesome image creating piece:)...peace, jill
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Date: 5/2/2016 11:26:00 AM
many thanks Jill :)-luloo

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