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The Cadence of My Heart

Morning found me on a river bank basking in the warmth of the sun I thought of myself as a turtle, believing my shell was armor shielding my heart from everyone I started to doze in placid tranquility The sun's sultry breath laving my skin Then I heard a splash and fear set in as you swam across the lake to me Cowardly, I ran. Deeply hidden was I or so I mistakingly thought beneath barren branches, I quietly lie amongst Autumn leaves on forest floor trying to lull the cadence of my heart You breached the surface body glistening in sunlight's splendor I moved farther into the forest shivering, not from a chill, but fear as your treading steps drew near I closed my eyes but could not dismiss thoughts surging through my mind I had no control over any of those Your hands lifted me from cowering pose Your lips touched mine in prurient kiss Not a word did either care to utter but there was need of none Mid morning found us basking in the sun Your sultry breath laving my skin My heart pulsing, aflutter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/25/2020 4:02:00 AM
Nice discovery.... Well written poetry
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2020 5:44:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, Ashok.
Date: 12/18/2019 5:38:00 PM
Mesmerizing storytelling Lin, I am amazed (well I shouldn't be) just have not read this quality of writing since...you left, please don't leave again!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 5:44:00 PM
Oh, J.D. you make me smile and cry at the same time. I am so grateful for your many visits. I think I'll stick around for a while. Thank You, Brother.
Date: 12/18/2019 1:41:00 PM
WoW! Lin, You are such a good writer. I am so happy to see you posting more often. Great title and content. Your story had intrigue, suspense and amazing imagery. I'm delighted that it turned out to be a love story. You know how feel about those. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much for your gracious thoughts, Alexis. Yes, I DO know how your emotions are touched by a love story. I'm delighted that you like this one. May day is spiffy...hope yours is, too.
Date: 12/18/2019 3:12:00 AM
Darkly passionate and sensually melancholy ... I LOVE these layers and analogies you paint, for they spin the imagination wheels, and there is no greater gift a poet can give to others. Splendid stuff, and another fave! :o) <3
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2019 5:02:00 AM
Thank you sweet Alexis.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/18/2019 1:43:00 PM
I agree, your poetry is a gift.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2019 12:47:00 PM
If you think of my poetry as a gift, I'm encouraged to write and wrap them in ribbons. Thank you very much, Greg.
Date: 12/17/2019 6:20:00 PM
Lin, a wonderfully penned passionate poem, very captivating!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Tania. It started off in one direction and ended up as a romantic interlude. Go figure.
Date: 12/17/2019 1:05:00 PM
These moments of passion are timeless...Nicely put together...
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2019 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo. I'm pleased with your comments as well as your visit.

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