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'the Buzz'

dancing under the moonlight
oblivious to the pests
flying with a buzzing sound 
mosquito bite me

romance a thing of the past
a puffed-up lip can do that
I tried my best to swat him
send him Nikko’s way

By: Wilma Neels

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Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:48:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/15/2012 3:36:00 AM Congrats Wilma,, that's another witty one I'm reading!! love.. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/15/2012 1:50:00 AM Congratulations on your super win Wilma xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/14/2012 11:11:00 PM Wilma, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/14/2012 10:50:00 PM Congratulations Wilma on your fun first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/14/2012 8:45:00 PM Big congratulations to you in this contest, Wilma. You chose a sweet victim! Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/14/2012 8:42:00 PM Greeat one Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/14/2012 8:33:00 PM Look what my dragonfly bite did? ha ha...I am sooo pleased for your awesome success with this almost romantic piece, Wilma! A lil ice on that puffy lip should help immensely....Have a great weekend, gal. Love, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/14/2012 7:54:00 PM lol...funny one Wilma!! Congratulations on your win!!! big hugs,love deb Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2012 7:23:00 PM congrats Wilma on a super win for first place with this fantastic entry luv.. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/14/2012 7:17:00 PM congrats on your win Wilma Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/11/2012 7:55:00 AM lol, loved this fun piece, wilma. lfde Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/10/2012 5:27:00 PM Oh this is gonna be hysterical, you and Nikko both with puffed up lips!....It's like a trail of painful insect bites...Your poem is so very well done, Wilma...romantic too!...Best of luck to you....buzzzzzzzzz! Love, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/10/2012 6:23:00 AM BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :).. lOVELY POST WHICH MADE ME SMILE SWEET WILLMA :)bzzzzzzzzzzzzz Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 4/9/2012 12:23:00 AM very articulate. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/8/2012 11:14:00 PM See?! Even mosquitoes want to kiss you ^_^!! You sure described this scene well, gosh I can hear that mosquito buzzing right now! Reading this made me laugh aloud-- that puffed-up lip made me smile, and haha very witty of you, sending that mosquito my way-- on a good day, I can catch a mosquito one-handed-- *squish!!* thanks for thinking of me and sending him my way :) mwahugs! Login to Reply

Tracy Edwards Date: 4/8/2012 8:53:00 PM Poor itchy Nikko...Nice dodo Wilma xxx Hugs Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 4/8/2012 6:35:00 PM haha this is pretty ingenious Wilma. Way to go Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/8/2012 6:16:00 PM wow wow wonderful "bite" Wilma.. hope she is up to the challenge..haha.. thankxx for joining in the fun of my crazy idea luv.. good luck.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/8/2012 5:59:00 PM VERY cute. I like the part about your lip puffing up and romance is a thing of the past. Login to Reply