'the Buzz'

dancing under the moonlight
oblivious to the pests
flying with a buzzing sound 
mosquito bite me

romance a thing of the past
a puffed-up lip can do that
I tried my best to swat him
send him Nikko’s way

By: Wilma Neels

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

April 15, 2012 at 3:36 AM

Congrats Wilma,, that's another witty one I'm reading!! love..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

April 15, 2012 at 1:50 AM

Congratulations on your super win Wilma xx

Poet Destroyer A

April 14, 2012 at 11:11 PM

Wilma, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

April 14, 2012 at 10:50 PM

Congratulations Wilma on your fun first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2012 at 8:45 PM

Big congratulations to you in this contest, Wilma. You chose a sweet victim!

Joyce Johnson

April 14, 2012 at 8:42 PM

Greeat one Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

April 14, 2012 at 8:33 PM

Look what my dragonfly bite did? ha ha...I am sooo pleased for your awesome success with this almost romantic piece, Wilma! A lil ice on that puffy lip should help immensely....Have a great weekend, gal. Love, Gwendolen

Deborah Burch

April 14, 2012 at 7:54 PM

lol...funny one Wilma!! Congratulations on your win!!! big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 14, 2012 at 7:23 PM

congrats Wilma on a super win for first place with this fantastic entry luv..

Joseph May

April 14, 2012 at 7:17 PM

congrats on your win Wilma

Jack Horne

April 11, 2012 at 7:55 AM

lol, loved this fun piece, wilma. lfde

Gwendolen Song

April 10, 2012 at 5:27 PM

Oh this is gonna be hysterical, you and Nikko both with puffed up lips!....It's like a trail of painful insect bites...Your poem is so very well done, Wilma...romantic too!...Best of luck to you....buzzzzzzzzz! Love, Gwendolen

Charmaine Chircop

April 10, 2012 at 6:23 AM

BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :).. lOVELY POST WHICH MADE ME SMILE SWEET WILLMA :)bzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

April 9, 2012 at 12:23 AM

very articulate.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 8, 2012 at 11:14 PM

See?! Even mosquitoes want to kiss you ^_^!! You sure described this scene well, gosh I can hear that mosquito buzzing right now! Reading this made me laugh aloud-- that puffed-up lip made me smile, and haha very witty of you, sending that mosquito my way-- on a good day, I can catch a mosquito one-handed-- *squish!!* thanks for thinking of me and sending him my way :) mwahugs!