'the Buzz'

dancing under the moonlight oblivious to the pests flying with a buzzing sound mosquito bite me romance a thing of the past a puffed-up lip can do that I tried my best to swat him send him Nikko’s way By: Wilma Neels ©080420122332

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2012 3:36:00 AM

Congrats Wilma,, that's another witty one I'm reading!! love..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 1:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win Wilma xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2012 11:11:00 PM

Wilma, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/14/2012 10:50:00 PM

Congratulations Wilma on your fun first place win!! Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:45:00 PM

Big congratulations to you in this contest, Wilma. You chose a sweet victim!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2012 8:42:00 PM

Greeat one Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 8:33:00 PM

Look what my dragonfly bite did? ha ha...I am sooo pleased for your awesome success with this almost romantic piece, Wilma! A lil ice on that puffy lip should help immensely....Have a great weekend, gal. Love, Gwendolen

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 7:54:00 PM

lol...funny one Wilma!! Congratulations on your win!!! big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 7:23:00 PM

congrats Wilma on a super win for first place with this fantastic entry luv..

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2012 7:17:00 PM

congrats on your win Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2012 7:55:00 AM

lol, loved this fun piece, wilma. lfde

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/10/2012 5:27:00 PM

Oh this is gonna be hysterical, you and Nikko both with puffed up lips!....It's like a trail of painful insect bites...Your poem is so very well done, Wilma...romantic too!...Best of luck to you....buzzzzzzzzz! Love, Gwendolen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/10/2012 6:23:00 AM

BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :).. lOVELY POST WHICH MADE ME SMILE SWEET WILLMA :)bzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/9/2012 12:23:00 AM

very articulate.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/8/2012 11:14:00 PM

See?! Even mosquitoes want to kiss you ^_^!! You sure described this scene well, gosh I can hear that mosquito buzzing right now! Reading this made me laugh aloud-- that puffed-up lip made me smile, and haha very witty of you, sending that mosquito my way-- on a good day, I can catch a mosquito one-handed-- *squish!!* thanks for thinking of me and sending him my way :) mwahugs!

Tracy Edwards

Date: 4/8/2012 8:53:00 PM

Poor itchy Nikko...Nice dodo Wilma xxx Hugs

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/8/2012 6:35:00 PM

haha this is pretty ingenious Wilma. Way to go

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2012 6:16:00 PM

wow wow wonderful "bite" Wilma.. hope she is up to the challenge..haha.. thankxx for joining in the fun of my crazy idea luv.. good luck..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2012 5:59:00 PM

VERY cute. I like the part about your lip puffing up and romance is a thing of the past.