The Butterflies Dance

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~The Butterflies Dance~ (Haiku Duo) There in the garden among flowers butterflies Happy dance all 'round Seeping sweet nectar they feed on till they are full then just fly away Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October.26.2015

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 9:16:00 PM

nice. SKAT

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Skat,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, n' comments.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D.

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/27/2015 8:04:00 AM

Lovely, Dorian, and a welcome piece of verse- we've been a little short on butterflies this year. Viv x

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2015 9:04:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Viv,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, n' comments.Sorry to hear that Viv, that's very sad.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2015 5:18:00 PM

stunning images and imagery:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2015 9:02:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, n' comments, and the 7.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:) Hugs!D.