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The Buried Hatchets

Nobody ever forgets where he buried the hatchet. ~ Kin Hubbard You bring the hatchet each time and you bury it deep. Your friend is still your friend. Many hatchets more with them you will bury. But each new time they cut you with another hatchet, it opens up old wounds. Some cuts - as deep as the holes they were buried in - take longer and longer to heal. One day you realize the cuts of many hatchets have not been healing nicely. The blood you bleed has left a trail. You follow that trail to the many other hatchets you thought were so well-buried. Maybe you will hoist up those hatchets- every last one of them - and raise them high above your head, then bring them down once and for all with all your might. WHACK! Then you can say “You, my friend, are dead to me.” Oct. 15, 2020 N/A in the Quotable Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/22/2020 12:11:00 PM
Ha ha, love where you went with this one : )
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
A brilliant piece, indeed, Andrea, with smooth flow of words!!
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Date: 10/19/2020 4:54:00 PM
You've been having some Stephen King dreams again, I see... nicely written free verse on the dark side, my friend.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/19/2020 8:30:00 PM
hope people took it as metaphorical. hahaha. (or was it?)
Date: 10/16/2020 5:36:00 PM
Hello Andrea … very factual indeed Andrea. So often the hatchet remains hidden for the next episode of vitreol - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 10/16/2020 4:50:00 PM
A very powerful poem, Andrea. Sometimes we hurt each other by accident, but other times it is intentional. I hate to come to the realization that a friend is "dead to me," but it has happened. Surely a winner in Regina's contest! HUgs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2020 4:33:00 PM
True death of a thousand cuts. Vindictive and saucy. Your blade is sharp in this poem. -Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2020 6:13:00 PM
thanks so much, Richard. That is what I was going for.
Date: 10/16/2020 8:41:00 AM
Damn.... Dont know if this one is a bit tongue in cheek, with the last stanza or very very dark.. However, great idea for this contest..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2020 6:14:00 PM
thanks, I had no idea where my pen was going with it. I paid tribute to a favorite netflix show of mine at the end. haha.
Date: 10/16/2020 6:07:00 AM
it's not easy to just bury the hatchet, andie...your stirring work addresses this plight.. huggs
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Date: 10/15/2020 8:32:00 PM
Ouch. Well, it happens like that and isn't a rare thing I think. Many a friendship has gotten hacked apart indeed. Well said. I like.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2020 6:13:00 PM
for me this is a very rare thing but I had fun with this!! thanks for reading, Kathy.
Date: 10/15/2020 7:38:00 PM
I’m not entirely sure why, but I really like this piece. Perhaps because it makes me think that Stephen King could have wrote this verse. A very disturbing but delicious write.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2020 7:28:00 AM
thanks, I love King, so I love that comparison!
Date: 10/15/2020 7:03:00 PM
Always best to bury the hatchet, hanging onto to it leads to a slippery slope. Tom
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Date: 10/15/2020 6:24:00 PM
A brilliant piece! I love how you arranged the words to create a spectacular effect. A sure win! Goodluck! ~~~ BTW, thank you for pointing out the typo in the 6th line of my college poem, "Castles". I appreciate it more than you know dear Andrea.
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Date: 10/15/2020 1:20:00 PM
I buried many hatchets but a few kept theirs. ~~
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Date: 10/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
I know that feeling! Great writing Andrea. ~ Elaine
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