The Bulge

Losing weight is a Summer tradition
To get myself in good swimsuit condition
        But it seems that my fate
        Is I start it too late
so instead of a loss - there's addition!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:47 PM
glad you got better than an HM this time with your excellent limerick! congrats. Luv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:30 AM
I understant totally, congrats on your win in the contest Ralph
Richards Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:07 AM
What a cute poem....and oh yes...that swim suit versus the ice cream cone tell-tale story we can all relate to this tale of woe! Congrats to you, Ralph!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Congrats Ralph on another super win in Brian's contest with yet another fantastic creation in poetry my friend.. a wow one.. enjoy..
George   Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Awesome, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Ralph. Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Ralph in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations Ralph, on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Congrats Ralph on your HM in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy your honor my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
La France Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 8:51 PM
This is really fun, well done, best of luck in the contest
Muzzey Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Cute, I liked it very much. Good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 4:18 PM
hahaha, yours is very limerick-ish. I hope this one does well. LUv, andrea
Belt Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 4:06 PM
LOL Good One Ralph.....Larry
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:42 PM
really cute, good luck
A   Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 2:34 PM
good luck in the contest, enjoyed,..p.d.
Tideswell Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Really enjoyed reading 'The Bulge'. Great limerick form and very amusing. Diets always seem to start tomorrow. Good luck in the contest.
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