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The Brutal Man

I may be gentle as Jack but patience is what i lack my best word is smack therefore,no nut is too hard for me to crack I always walk in the park even when nature says;its dark cos,my every step ignites a spark so i don't deserve that nike mark I creep before i walk so i think before i talk my muscles is like a bundle of stalk thats why am stronger than a hulk so i leave more traces like a chalk I bath with words lotion with oratory and perfume with poetry so i make the library my secret laboratory Am not too much of a wordsmith but i drop iron-lines that can not be beaten by a blacksmith the WORLD is a dark movie so i act more better than willsmith am now your cinema,so grab some wool-candy and take a sit. Its 'THE BRUTAL MAN'.. I go brutal with words...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2012 5:43:00 AM
D'rhymer i love this shit. Boy this shit HOT!
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:11:00 PM
This is great... luv it..
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M-Key D'Rhymer
Date: 9/19/2011 2:23:00 AM
thanks dear...maybe i should dedicate it 2 u..
Date: 9/18/2011 8:32:00 AM
You 'assault' me with your well written iron lines. Like the poem.
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M-Key D'Rhymer
Date: 9/19/2011 2:28:00 AM
ha,biko..don't let the bristish police hear that o...else i'll be rhyming for a prison warder....

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