The Brutal Man

I may be gentle as Jack
but patience is what i lack
my best word is smack
therefore,no nut is too hard for 
me to crack

I always walk in the park
even when nature says;its dark
cos,my every step ignites a spark
so i don't deserve that nike mark

I creep before i walk
so i think before i talk
my muscles is like a bundle of 
stalk
thats why am stronger than a 
hulk
so i leave more traces like a chalk

I bath with words
lotion with oratory 
and perfume with poetry
so i make the library my secret 
laboratory

Am not too much of a wordsmith
but i drop iron-lines that can not 
be beaten by a blacksmith
the WORLD is a dark movie 
so i act more better than 
willsmith
am now your cinema,so grab 
some wool-candy and take a sit.
Its 'THE BRUTAL MAN'..
I go brutal with words...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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D'Rhymez Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 5:43 AM
D'rhymer i love this shit. Boy this shit HOT!
Baity Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 1:11 PM
This is great... luv it..
D'Rhymer Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 2:23 AM
thanks dear...maybe i should dedicate it 2 u..
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 8:32 AM
You 'assault' me with your well written iron lines. Like the poem.
D'Rhymer Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 2:28 AM
ha,biko..don't let the bristish police hear that o...else i'll be rhyming for a prison warder....
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