The Brown Tree

All the nuts fell to the ground The sane ones on branches hang Long line from many countries My family tree

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Ann Foster

Date: 11/1/2019 1:02:00 AM

Excellent fun. Ann

Jeremy Martin

Date: 5/22/2012 1:40:00 PM

Quite clever Thank you for your comments on my poems ~Jeremy

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/19/2012 1:27:00 AM

Your family tree of the World is always nice where each and every members are nice without doubt. Your heart is so much big that every members known it well, I can guess it. Best wishes for the contest, loved bl

Corey Brown

Date: 2/16/2012 5:36:00 PM

"The sane ones on branches hang" could mean so many things and makes you want to reread over and over.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2012 2:20:00 PM

wow says alot and a scary lot at that kinda goes with my write for the day...genes are a hard thing to over come! Light & Love [great new photo!]

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2012 5:21:00 AM

oh, this one is so creativelty done, carol... inpeccable with an interesting concept---family tree.. winning huggs!:)

Sami Helbaoui

Date: 2/16/2012 1:38:00 AM

I love it!! Thanks a lot for sharing. Much love, Sami

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/16/2012 12:16:00 AM

Always loved writings on trees, and this is incredible.. very thoughtful, very intelligent...goes to my favorites..love to you carol and a happy valentine's day to you..gautami

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 9:42:00 PM

I love your poem! I spent many months working on my family tree. I can relate to the nuts!! Very witty. I'm still laughing. Blessings, Rhonda

Jesu Johnson

Date: 2/15/2012 7:42:00 PM

WOW!!!!! CAN I RATE THIS ONE HIGHER!!!!!! It is at least a 10!!!!!!

Gail Debole

Date: 2/15/2012 6:17:00 PM

Wonderful and witty! You really know how to convey your message in a special creative way. Thanks so much for your warm welcome and comments regarding my poem. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.