The Brown Tree

All the nuts fell to the ground
The sane ones on branches hang
Long line from many countries
My family tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
Quite clever Thank you for your comments on my poems ~Jeremy
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Date: 2/19/2012 1:27:00 AM
Your family tree of the World is always nice where each and every members are nice without doubt. Your heart is so much big that every members known it well, I can guess it. Best wishes for the contest, loved bl
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Date: 2/16/2012 5:36:00 PM
"The sane ones on branches hang" could mean so many things and makes you want to reread over and over.
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Date: 2/16/2012 2:20:00 PM
wow says alot and a scary lot at that kinda goes with my write for the day...genes are a hard thing to over come! Light & Love [great new photo!]
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Date: 2/16/2012 5:21:00 AM
oh, this one is so creativelty done, carol... inpeccable with an interesting concept---family tree.. winning huggs!:)
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Date: 2/16/2012 1:38:00 AM
I love it!! Thanks a lot for sharing. Much love, Sami
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Date: 2/16/2012 12:16:00 AM
Always loved writings on trees, and this is incredible.. very thoughtful, very intelligent...goes to my favorites..love to you carol and a happy valentine's day to you..gautami
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:42:00 PM
I love your poem! I spent many months working on my family tree. I can relate to the nuts!! Very witty. I'm still laughing. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 7:42:00 PM
WOW!!!!! CAN I RATE THIS ONE HIGHER!!!!!! It is at least a 10!!!!!!
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Date: 2/15/2012 6:17:00 PM
Wonderful and witty! You really know how to convey your message in a special creative way. Thanks so much for your warm welcome and comments regarding my poem. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 2/15/2012 4:36:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for letting me know about my placement in Brian's contest..Have a great eve..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:23:00 PM
OMG! This is so funny! Sharp, witty, and brilliant!...Milt
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:47:00 PM
CUTE as can BE, carol. you created a really fun poem for this contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:16:00 PM
Well written dodoitsu. Looks like a true contender Carol.
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:01:00 PM
A very unique and insightful write with focus on your family tree for this contest. This one is sure to please.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/15/2012 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Connie