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The Brown Tree

All the nuts fell to the ground
The sane ones on branches hang
Long line from many countries
My family tree

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Ann Foster

November 1, 2019 at 1:02 AM

Excellent fun. Ann

Jeremy Martin

May 22, 2012 at 1:40 PM

Quite clever Thank you for your comments on my poems ~Jeremy

Bl Devnath

February 19, 2012 at 1:27 AM

Your family tree of the World is always nice where each and every members are nice without doubt. Your heart is so much big that every members known it well, I can guess it. Best wishes for the contest, loved bl

Corey Brown

February 16, 2012 at 5:36 PM

"The sane ones on branches hang" could mean so many things and makes you want to reread over and over.

Debbie Guzzi

February 16, 2012 at 2:20 PM

wow says alot and a scary lot at that kinda goes with my write for the day...genes are a hard thing to over come! Light & Love [great new photo!]

Nette Onclaud

February 16, 2012 at 5:21 AM

oh, this one is so creativelty done, carol... inpeccable with an interesting concept---family tree.. winning huggs!:)

Sami Helbaoui

February 16, 2012 at 1:38 AM

I love it!! Thanks a lot for sharing. Much love, Sami

Gautami Phookan

February 16, 2012 at 12:16 AM

Always loved writings on trees, and this is incredible.. very thoughtful, very intelligent...goes to my favorites..love to you carol and a happy valentine's day to you..gautami

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 15, 2012 at 9:42 PM

I love your poem! I spent many months working on my family tree. I can relate to the nuts!! Very witty. I'm still laughing. Blessings, Rhonda

Jesu Johnson

February 15, 2012 at 7:42 PM

WOW!!!!! CAN I RATE THIS ONE HIGHER!!!!!! It is at least a 10!!!!!!

Gail Debole

February 15, 2012 at 6:17 PM

Wonderful and witty! You really know how to convey your message in a special creative way. Thanks so much for your warm welcome and comments regarding my poem. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.