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The Brook

The Brook He lived near a brook By a scraggly nook So he fished every day Using string and no hook. His house made of sticks Three stairs made of bricks He sat on at sunset And did magic tricks. When the rain poured Through the house he adored He kept time with the dripping Slept soundly and snored. His dog was all matted And over fed fatted Would lie on his back As he loved to be patted. By the light of the fireflies He’d do that strange thing And fish for the moon With no hook and a string. He would watch the moon Move about in the brook And watch as the frogs Bit the moon and it shook. The stars sparkle danced On the brook’s rippled face To the drumbeat of crickets In a hot weathered pace. By the scraggly nook Of his wandering brook He fishes in dreams With a string and no hook.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/29/2014 1:13:00 PM
John, I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2014 5:53:00 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, john
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank you John for entering my contest and congrats on your win.......Roger
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:55:00 PM
I am finally seeing the note you left me whilie coming here to congratulate you for your awesome win! Sure wish you would give me a message at my poem. I didn't sign up for notifications and even if I did, I have no time to track down comments at people's poems. It was cool to happen on this though and find out you share poetry in the school!! WRITE ON, John
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:30:00 PM
I love the way the lines are all really short and cutely rhymed . It is a well constructed fun type poem.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/19/2014 5:49:00 AM
Andrea, I write and share some poetry in an elementary school. It is a great feeling to get kindergarteners involved in poetry. Thanks for reading and commenting. Always appreciated

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