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The Breeze and I Plus a Thank You

This poem is dedicated to that kind person who donated me with a Premium Membership.  I did not expect it but my grateful thanks comes with a wish of a happy and healthy New Year.



The breeze whispers in my ears:
”Come and join me in a spree
Let's move out towards the sea
Over choppy waves on currents adrift,
See your boat is in full speed,
My strong breeze has filled your sails
And speedily all is glee.
The hot air on the beach is far behind,
For now it's all fresh and clean.
Dolphins jump out of the waves, 
Spraying droplets all around,
Till down again they go towards the deep.
Is it not a wonderful sight to see?”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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January 5, 2021 at 8:26 AM
I'm so surprised Victor that you were not I too thank this kind person for the lovely gift. You are a fine poet and deserve it. This is lovely as always and yes it is truly a wonderful sight to see dolphins playing in the sea. I love them . God Bless, JB
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January 5, 2021 at 8:26 AM
I'm so surprised Victor that you were not I too thank this kind person for the lovely gift. You are a fine poet and deserve it. This is lovely as always and yes it is truly a wonderful sight to see dolphins playing in the sea. I love them . God Bless, JB
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January 3, 2021 at 5:16 PM
Hi Victor, Bless the kind person that gifted you with a Premium membership. Because your talent is amazing, my friend:-) Alexis
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January 1, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Bless that kind person who recognized your talent and bless you for this light-hearted poem Victor! I can feel the salt-breeze and long for the freshness-a fave for me. :) Linda
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December 30, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Yes, it is a wonderful sight to see. A wonderful poem, Victor and a wonderful person that gave you the gift. Hope you have a great day :)
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December 29, 2020 at 5:40 AM
oh what a beautiful poem and such wonderful news Victor. I too know there are some true angels about on the site who bring such pleasure with these 'gifts of words' and yet remain anonymous. I am so happy for you :-) hugs jan xx
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December 29, 2020 at 5:02 AM
A wonderful dedication! Yes, my dear friend, so glad you received a deserving gift!
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December 28, 2020 at 11:21 PM
I can feel the sea spray on my cheeks Victor such wonderful imagery my friend. I love the sea so this is a FAV for me ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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December 28, 2020 at 11:04 PM
Love the imagery of this poem of thanks..Wonderful sir. Happy New Year.. Hugs Eve
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December 28, 2020 at 10:58 PM
I can almost feel the cool droplets and fresh sea breeze! I enjoyed the experience. Your gift was such a nice gesture. I'm happy for you. :)
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December 28, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Just beautiful, Victor!
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December 28, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Ahhh!! Awesome that someone would gift you with that generous gift. I hope you enjoy it to the fullest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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December 28, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Love this so much. a dream of mine. off to an uncharted island. wonderful well done. Pete.
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December 28, 2020 at 9:44 AM
A beautiful poem Victor.. So good to know and a wonderful gift. I loved these lines..,.'Dolphins jump out of the waves, spraying droplets all around'. God bless. Have a great day ~ Ani
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December 28, 2020 at 6:25 AM
The breeze and you sail well in synchrony--a lovely tender write, Victor.
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December 28, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Wonderful work. God B L E S S you and congrats on your wonderful message to your friend... a delightful and precious gift .. Happy New Year
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December 28, 2020 at 2:42 AM
A wonderful poem Victor for a wonderful gesture. Love the sea imagery! It's always nice to receive pleasant surprises!
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December 28, 2020 at 2:05 AM
That's so great to hear and this is such a lovely poetry...
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December 28, 2020 at 1:54 AM
What a lovely gift you've been given Victor, there are some wonderful people about. Tom
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