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The Breeze and I Plus a Thank You

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This poem is dedicated to that kind person who donated me with a Premium Membership. I did not expect it but my grateful thanks comes with a wish of a happy and healthy New Year. The breeze whispers in my ears: ”Come and join me in a spree Let's move out towards the sea Over choppy waves on currents adrift, See your boat is in full speed, My strong breeze has filled your sails And speedily all is glee. The hot air on the beach is far behind, For now it's all fresh and clean. Dolphins jump out of the waves, Spraying droplets all around, Till down again they go towards the deep. Is it not a wonderful sight to see?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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