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The Breeze

The breeze from the tall pine tree The cloud between you and me Blew off and the empty space Filled with the scent of your face It was an orange Lily The moment the breath of joy Mingled, the sparrow hilly Brought out the girl and the boy ____________________________________ June 3, 2018

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Date: 6/4/2018 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem about nature!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/4/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Susan
Date: 6/3/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir.
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 6/3/2018 6:44:00 PM
"A breath of joy as the breeze blows"...Congrats on your win Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/4/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph ...
Date: 6/3/2018 11:16:00 AM
your charming work made me smile, probir... i used 'lily' too in my recent entry.. huggs
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:57:00 AM
I am honoured ... Thank you, Nette ...
Date: 6/3/2018 7:19:00 AM
Filled with the scent of your face...it was an orange lily! How beautiful, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/4/2018 7:59:00 AM
Oh no ... I am not aware of such a scent ! ... Thank you so much ...

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