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The Break of Dawn (Haiku)

Dawn opens the morn’ Sunrays reach across the skies To dance on the sea

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Date: 12/14/2008 1:37:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. I love the uplifting last line. Creative use of this short form. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 9/24/2008 6:38:00 AM

Adell, this is just so beautiful! Forget the fact that it's in perfect form and has terrific flow, the visual appeal is in the imagery you created, magnificent! Michael

Deneen White

Date: 9/11/2008 6:04:00 PM

absolutely breathtaking and very picturesque, I can see this forming, take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/10/2008 5:48:00 AM

Oh Adell, how I would love to see the sun rise (or set) over the sea. A stunningly beautiful haiku. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/9/2008 10:35:00 PM

Great descriptive Haiku , Adell , in perfect 5~7~5 format...

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2008 6:02:00 PM

Lovely image!....~Carrie