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The Bramble

some say the world is flat perhaps theirs but mine has curves that define no straight lines but places where the sun can set behind the pear and peach trees or the rasp berry bush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/21/2019 1:07:00 PM
Love this, every word, and love the title. Bramble a word I love, the sound of it, the thick of it.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/21/2019 7:05:00 PM
Gracias Maureen. I thought the peach may be an Eliot cop out lol.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/21/2019 4:50:00 PM
-nope. It's tidier.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/21/2019 1:40:00 PM
I changed a bit of the ending before I read this comment Maureen. Thanks for your words; I hope I didn't ruin it.

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