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The Box

Sentences dripping with meaning, we sit, Foetal in a blissfully repetitive equation, Extinguished stumps of trees taking brief roots On a plastic surface a meteor’s distance above; A flood of harmony resumes under the clinical glow of misspent youth. Condensation condescends from dull walls Saturated with dim impressionable images, Ideas shaped to a teardrop’s curve leaking From cloud-like minds to dry tongues in a leaden cavalcade; Thus everything means anything insightful anymore. We ascend in drowsy downpour of precise procedure, Ending this sodden epoch for the molten notes And clean ceiling-clung starlight of a place beyond The Box.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/21/2014 11:45:00 PM
Hi Dan, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, it identifies within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/21/2014 5:45:00 PM
Dan, love the ending... Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:41:00 AM
awesome write
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