The Bouquet

The bride created her bouquet
With seeming just-picked flowers,
The pretty kind that benefitted
From a day of showers.

Her perfect simple long white gown
Fulfilled part of its mission – 
To highlight those sweet blossoms
In accordance with tradition.

But this bouquet was different
Since a secret it concealed,
A tribute to her dad to whom
The thought would have appealed.

For wrapped around the clutch of stems,
Right where her hands would touch,
Was a necktie of her father’s
Whom she surely missed so much.

She didn’t advertise the fact,
A private gesture; still,
Just as touching as I’ve ever seen
And think I ever will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gondolf Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 8:15 AM
What a sweet poem with your wonderful rhythm and rhyme, Ilene. I enjoyed the read. John
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 12:14 PM
What a touching poem Ilene I have a huge lump in my throat reading of this wonderful gesture, she must have felt close to him even thought sadly he wasn't there to attend himself. I am sure many would have been moved to tears if it had been more evident at the wedding. :-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Hey Jan! The bride didn't even tell her mom (my friend) about what she did until her mom noticed the bouquet on a table after the ceremony and asked about it. I think it was supposed to be a very private gesture (although I've just outed her here!)
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