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We lived in a home near the edge of the woods. Old wooden floors would creak with every step. One night when I was home alone with only our German Sheppard dog, Shep, to keep me company, The boogeyman came calling. He was dressed all in black with a hood covering his head. I had already retired to bed. I lay there awake in the dark Thinking of a myriad of things I needed to attend to next day, As I flipped over from left to right I saw that boogeyman leaning In close, right over my face. I am ashamed to admit that I Screamed like a little child, then Quickly drew covers over my head. Now Shep didn't bark, which I Found really quite strange, and I lay there very still barely breathing. I listened to hear steps on the floor, But the house was quite still. After about fifteen minutes I got Brave enough to slowly uncover. The boogeyman had vanished Without a sound or evidence left. He scared the daylights out of me! I called Shep over and made him Sleep with me, holding onto his Paw when he tried to creep away. The boogeyman never returned, But I never forgot his chilling visit. May 27, 2016 A True Story Boogeyman Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron  Sixth place

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Date: 10/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
Just the time of year to read this gem. I've always loved the mysterious, supernatural creaks in the night of Poe and like. Great writing!
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
Seven for sure!!
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:52:00 AM
brilliant write ! great win indeed.
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Date: 6/6/2016 9:14:00 AM
Oooooh! This is so scary bringing back memories of eerie encounters I have had with the Boogeyman! Congratulations, my friend on a well-deserved wonderful win! Hugs and a 7. Pandita
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Date: 6/6/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you much Pandita. So nice to hear from you. ; )
Date: 6/4/2016 2:32:00 PM
what a chilling write Connie - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2016 3:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan. ; ) xx
Date: 6/3/2016 8:12:00 PM
OMG, it really happened?? You really deserved a win, Connie. (just saw your answer to me that this is true. Maybe it was your imagination, like in my poem where I thought i saw a circus parade right in front of my face when I woke up from sleep one day at age 6) Anyway, I submitted an oldie that didn't win, but Congrats to YOU, sweetie. Awesome.
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Date: 6/4/2016 2:21:00 PM
I had just retired, had not gone to sleep yet. It was very real and not imagination which is why I was so scared I had to call our dog on the bed with me. He knew he was never allowed on the bed so he kept trying to creep away as I fell off to sleep. Sorry yours didn't get on the list. I appreciate your congrats. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Date: 6/2/2016 7:51:00 PM
Sounds as if this really happened, how scary! Congrats on your placement Connie
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Date: 6/4/2016 2:27:00 PM
Yes, it is true Brian. Thank you.; )
Date: 6/2/2016 7:43:00 PM
Sounds very real.....congratulations
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Date: 6/4/2016 2:30:00 PM
It was a true event Janis. Thank you. ; )
Date: 6/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Connie on the placement of the contest
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Date: 6/3/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you very much on my sixth placement Nayda. ; )
Date: 6/1/2016 4:33:00 AM
I'm sorry that this really happened to you. Sounds scary enough. All the best:)
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Date: 5/30/2016 10:41:00 AM
As I read it I told myself that you're very convincing, then I had a look at the comments and realized that it did really happen! A very good narrative, scary and shivery, befitting the theme! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/30/2016 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Paul. I thought he was the perfect boogeyman to use for this contest. ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 7:08:00 PM
Very scary, Connie...even more so when we don't know if it was imagination or something really happened that we have no answer for...and that does happen. Great write and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:18:00 PM
This is true Sandra. Strange things can happen that we have no explanation for. Thanks, Connie ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 6:07:00 PM
A great entry Connie. It should be a winner. Thank you for reading my poetry and commenting on it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:18:00 PM
My pleasure Joyce. Thank you for your encouraging words. ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 4:47:00 PM
gosh, Connie, you make me think this actually happened to you, it' so chilling. Way to take the Boogeyman challenge, my friend!!!
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:21:00 PM
It did Andrea. Scared the heck out of me. We moved from that house that was out in the boonies. Thanks, Connie ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 2:34:00 PM
- Connie, this is the best boogeyman poem ..... a winning poems! - A terrifying experience ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:22:00 PM
It was Anne-Lise. I never forgot how scared I was. Thank you. ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 11:50:00 AM
everybody fears boogeyman,and since you say its a true story then I can imagine the horrors you encountered,Connie.Haunting piece poet.
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:24:00 PM
It was true and very scary. At least he never came back. Thank you Maraj. ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 10:22:00 AM
This is perfect! I had a giant stuffed St Bernard that I slept with when I was a kid.
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:26:00 PM
I had a kitty I slept with when young but this happened when I was an adult. I don't know what I would have done without our dog to calm me down. Thanks Richard. ; )
Date: 5/29/2016 4:48:00 AM
how eerie! i've had a couple of similar strange experiences in my life...good luck in the contest, and thanks for reading me
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte. Then you understand the fear I felt. ; )
Date: 5/28/2016 11:15:00 PM
Delightful scarey read! :) Hugs
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Arthur. ; )
Date: 5/28/2016 11:05:00 PM
Crikey Connie ... something like this sticks like glue doesn't it - thanks Connie - Lindsay
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:41:00 PM
I agree. You never forget the fear. At least he didn't attack me. I would have been traumatized forever. Thanks, Connie ; )
Date: 5/28/2016 10:16:00 PM
wow...very frightening tale Connie. I wouldn't feel safe again there.
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:39:00 PM
We moved shortly after Tim. Thank you. ; )
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:16:00 PM
That sure was a scarey oto too!!!! :) :)
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:16:00 PM
Ops Photo, silly me
Date: 5/28/2016 9:26:00 PM
You chilled me. I'm certain fright itself could kill me. I had a German Sheppard in my twenties named Caesar and, once, when I read Peter Straub's book, "Ghost Story", I couldn't even look up from the pages unless Caesar sat near. Your story mystifies me 'cause I want to know what it was! And where it is now, ha. I like how your fear changed to brave and enjoyed the telling very much ... (I'm sleepy and probably rambling) ... CayCay
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:57:00 PM
I was smothering under the blanket or I never would have pulled the covers down. Haha. I have heard other stories of the men in black who visit. He may have been from another realm, or a curious ET. Who knows? Scared the heck out of me though. Thanks, Connie ; )

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