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The Bogeyman

Soaking wet the grey sheep huddle by the stone wall shaped and laid to last five hundred more years still. Rains sheeting o'er the moor leave us dripping as the fish in Foley's Tarn. Clouds careen across the sky like ragged flags unfurling, our house is battered by the storm's relentless wrath, and something's coming... It's nights like this that bring the creature from the other side of time, misshapen wretch,no measure of humanity, drags its loathsome body to our door. Squelching abomination, a travesty of decency and grace. Not marked in any almanac, no picture of this beast save in the nightmares of our child, who flies into his mother's arms and trembles, trying to scrape the ugly specter from his mind, for he knows... he can feel the slimy presence hidden deep within the shadows of the house. Is it living only in his darkest fears? Once settled is he free of fang and claw? "Leave the light on, Mom!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/6/2009 7:11:00 AM
Wow Keith, love this spooky write. I read King and Koontz and like a good fright. The ending adds just the right amount of humor to this delightful read! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 12/28/2008 5:55:00 PM
Even the wind sounds spookie when the lights are out. Good write. Vince
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Date: 12/28/2008 5:56:00 AM
drippin as the fish in Foley's Tarn!! .........What a beautiful line! An I see ye've met the bin man too. Thanks for writing you make reading a pleasure
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Date: 12/27/2008 2:07:00 PM
I'm leaving th light on tonight ..for sure! I enjoyed this. When I was little I thought there was an alligator under my bed..how many nights did i call for my mother to come and look!? sigh.BG
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:28:00 AM
Awesome! I am a huge fan of horror (not the gory kind) especially Stephen King. You captured the bogey man well with this and I loved the ending. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/26/2008 11:04:00 PM
huh...you had me there.
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