The Boatman's Song 6/ Many

The Boatman’s Song 6/Many

Indra again tried to convince Urveshi

But, here in heaven, Urveshi
Even the flowers are born, never to fade and die 
Unlike the humans on earth, who hardly gets a
Chance to bloom fully and smile

One day on earth, you would find Urveshi, 
You no longer remain the same
And there would be no time for you, to repent then
But today, you have all the time to think and rethink on it 

I am giving you sometime, Urveshi
As you are my most dear and beloved 
Among all the Apsaras of heaven
You dwell in my mind and soul, like the most precious
Among all, my own bodies heart
You think and rethink on your desire
To go or not to go to earth  
To listen the songs of the boatman 
Whom you are missing so much 

Urveshi, you are the most beautiful 
And the most charming Apsara of heaven
Gifted with extraordinary heavenly powers 
But your visit to earth 
May diminish or even finish your heavenly powers

If you ever go close and touch the boatman
Even for a moment to praise his songs
This would end your blessings of heaven and
You may not be able to come back to heaven

Inner Conflict of Urveshi

Cautioned by Indra, Urveshi pondered and pondered
To which way she should go?
Should she hear the voice of her heart
Or follow the instructions of her mind
Her heart was crying to meet the unseen boatman
And her ears were longing to listen 
The heart stolen melodies of the boatman
Floating in the air on earth and echoing even in heaven

She felt that her very existence was incomplete
Without the songs of the boatman 
And without meeting that unseen dweller of her heart 


Perhaps her beauty was formed 
By the blessings of God
So that, one day she may find the other half of her part

But then her mind intervened, while she was 
Listening the voice of her heart
And asked her, can she afford to bear the loss
Of the glory of her name and fame
Which has brought her laurels, crowns and applauses
Can she forgo that she rule the hearts of everyone in heaven
And above all,  the heaven has given her the sublime gift of 
Evergreen Youth

Ravindra                                                 to continue…

Kanpur   India 9th January 2010  
* Apsara (A Nymph dancer of heaven in the court of Indra as per Hindu Mythology
* Indra (The Lord of Heaven as per Hindu mythology
* Urveshi (One of the beloved Apsaras of Indra 
* Saraswati (Goddess of knowledge, music & arts)
* Jungle (Forest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/26/2015 6:00:00 PM
Ravindra, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/26/2015 9:19:00 PM
How wonderful 2 know that this one is the favourite one yours dear friend. The inner conflict which was going in the mind of Urvashi is actually a conflict of every women/men, we all feel and face almost everyday in our life and taking a decision between the two utmost dear things is often faced by us. Thanks again4 revisiting this Poem. More on your page soon. Love& best wishes Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/17/2010 10:52:00 AM
We cannot fault Urveshi for her attraction to the boatman and his songs. Without someone special in our lives, many of us feel our "very existence (is) incomplete," Ravindra. I think I would choose love over "Evergreen Youth," my friend. Such a marvelous read, filled with melody and an incredible story! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2010 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for keeping me enthralled....on to the next part. :)
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Date: 1/10/2010 6:14:00 AM
On to the next part. Lainie
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:37:00 AM
Ravindra, I felt one with her as I read through each enduring line eagerly anticipating how this story would end.I imagine the boatmans song is magical and quite serenely beautiful. As I listened to it in my head while reading.I'm so happy to see that this story doesn't end it continues on!!! Can't wait for the next one! So beautiful my friend. Love Light Patty
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