The Boatmans Song 2

The Boatman’s Song        2/ Many

Urvashi’s heart was aching to hear and to see the elegance  
Of the boatman, while he sing those melodies on earth 
A great longing started sprouting in her bosom  
To visit the earth and to listen those heart touching songs 
Which like a powerful magnet were pulling her towards earth
Where flows the Ganges and lives her unseen love 

To control her ever increasing desire of hearing those songs 
And to see that unique boatman, who lives on earth 
Urveshi tried to engage her more and more 
In the courtly dances and engagements for Indra
But the more she wanted to escape, more she became enchanted
By the echoes of boatman’s songs 
Which were tearing her heart and 
Making her mind almost intoxicated,  
By the melodies of those heavenly songs

The pleasures and comforts of heaven began to pinch her 
Like the piercing thorns 
Even the dance and music, which were her pride and passion
Became dull and charm less in the wake of those songs
For which she was hailed 
As the best among all the Apsaras in the entire universe  

Heaven seems to bring no joy and rejoicing for her any more
Her dancing steps, which were the symbols of perfection and beauty
Even started betraying her 
As her own heart was no longer in her possession any more
And she found that her mind and heart
Were swept away by that unseen boatman
Sailing his boat somewhere on earth

Apsara Urveshi after finishing her dance that day 
Told the God of heaven, Indra
That she perhaps can no longer perform any dance
Owing to agonies of her heart and restlessness of her mind
And her legs were not in tune with her mind to perform
A flawless dance and song by which she had captured the 
Hearts of all Gods and Goddess, what to say of humans on earth

She thought and thought and found that she can only normalize
If she can hear the songs of the boatman 
Singing in full throated ease on earth 
The echo’s of which were hovering in her mind like clouds
And twisting her heart to see that singer sublime


Ravindra 

Kanpur India 5th January 2010 
* Apsara   =   A Nymph dancer of heaven in the court of Indra as per Hindu Mythology 
* Indra      =   The Lord of Heaven as per Hindu mythology
* Urveshi  =   One of the beloved Apsaras of Indra 
* Saraswati = Goddess of knowledge, music & arts
* Jungle      =  Forest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/5/2013 7:58:00 AM
Good morning, RAVINDRA, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:08:00 AM
Try my verse Precious Fare..it shows yet another woman trapped by love and caring in the same state of trapped frustration! Onward to 3! Light & Love
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:56:00 PM
Dear Ravindra, I have started reading your Boatman's Song and I am finding it very impressive indeed. I look forward to continuing to read all of them. This has a melancholy beauty that is fascinating. I love the flavor of India and I have a picture of Sarswati playing a veena sitting right next to my computer to inspire me. Thank you (Mahalo) for your kind comment on my poem. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:14:00 AM
Sad story Ravindra. I am trying to to learn to enjoy the pleasures of heaven above the pleasures of a natural earth, while this story seems to be going the opposite. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:08:00 AM
A sad but poignant commentary here on how Uvrashi's overwhelming love made her lost sight of the other things that give her joy -- dancing and music. Love can be all-consuming, regardless of your culture. Even today some of our greatest artists and celebrities suffer losses due to their passions. Senators' political aspirations are destroyed frequently when their love affairs are exposed. Edgar Allen Poe wallowed in misery for years after losing Lenore. Very interesting work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2010 6:04:00 AM
Magical journey...I will move on to the next part. Lainie
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Date: 1/7/2010 7:47:00 AM
Wow! This feels magical. Can't wait for three! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/6/2010 8:20:00 AM
Such a buildup of emotion to read into the next part of your wonderful story.. if this is true ..is it u.. and if it is true .. it is magnificent.. onto part 3... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/5/2010 2:08:00 PM
Interesting tale told in this poetry. Sad that she had such conflicting desires dividing her between heaven and earth. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem"Two". Sara
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:12:00 PM
~~~Magnificent~~~ Keep them coming please. Love, Carol
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