The Boardwalk and the Blue Fairy

The sugar sweet balm of salt water taffy
      graced the breeze.
While savoring deep breaths of this seaside confection,
       I held tightly, my grandmother’s hand.
I was five years old and we had come to the shore,
      just the two of us, for a few days.

The boardwalk was hot. The sun’s intensity matched
     only by the hypnotic rhythm of the whitecaps
rushing their sandy demise.

Strolling along, I spotted a beautiful window.
     It boasted the most remarkable display of miniatures.
 There were elaborate, colorful settings of Ferris wheels and rides
     and it was full of Disney memorabilia.

Having just seen Pinocchio, I asked for the tiny Blue Fairy.
     She was beautiful and sure to bestow her magic on me.
I took my prize and together we sat for hours and gazed,
the ocean, the gulls, beach babies, my sweet guardian and me.
Indeed, my diminutive new friend did accompany me for 
     the rest of my stay and long after.

That wonderful day, a blessed memory of my grandmother,
     will be with me forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/21/2018 4:32:00 PM
Your simple words paint an elegant picture of beloved past...awesome recall of childhood memories..well crafted, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay, it’s very kind of you to read and comment!!
Date: 5/21/2018 11:31:00 AM
Sad and beautiful Mike. A universal feeling. Memories are the most important thing we have to treasure in the end. Someone posted a picture on fb today ... that really had an impact on me. It was a crowd of people held back by a barricade and they were all viewing some kind of event. There were about 25 people visible in the frame ... all holding up cell phones ... with the exception of one elderly woman in the front of the crowd, no phone, just absorbing the moment into memory.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 12:35:00 PM
wow, that is so true, devices hold the memories now for so many. The actual event is not fully experienced. Thanks Judy for your kind words and visit, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 5/21/2018 11:18:00 AM
Such a sweet memory! It brought back memories of going to the salt water taffy shop at the beach in Maine. Watching them making it there too. A special poem this is :) Your gratitude is special too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank so much, Heidi, I am truly blessed to have these memories to cherish xxoo
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